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My beautiful inspiration

2011-04-25T21:49:00.000-07:00

My beautiful inspiration

Story written by : ME and only me !!!

Started: April 20, 2011

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It was very warm that day and I decided to step out of my 3 year old rented apartment. That’s when I saw her.

My beautiful inspiration………

I looked down at my sketching and saw nothing, just lines of ….nonentity. I hate that I can’t think of anything to kick start my comic. The last one had been a disaster….. Harsh critics …..They nearly killed me. Heck! I think I’m already dead now.

I just need an inspiration…… even a tiny bit will do. Talking to my girlfriend? …I mean my ex-girlfriend is so out of question. Another reason why I’m still stuck … right now I just want to blame everything on her. I know it’s not right, but I just don’t care.

I need something fresh, something unexpected, something …..arrrghhh who am I kidding, I’m a gonner. Phone’s been ringing non stop for days. Editors are like vultures waiting to peck, the moment you throw in the towel. For someone who was at the top of the world, I’m now looking at nothing but the dirt in between my toes.

Yeah that’s me alright !!! The dirty dirt seeker. Ah- maybe if I write about my pathetic self I might get something, oh yes I can see it now, big bold headline “Biggest loser writes about his journey to loser land”. Seesh…

Gosh why is it so freaking hot today, it’s like seating in an oven?

I walked pass my dinner/working table, stacks of instant noodle cups threatening to collapse from the vibration of my feet thumping the floor. Self Note: must clean up later, soon ……never HAH. I pulled open my creaky balcony door, stepped out and stretched my body. The sunshine teases my eyes, forcing me to look away. That’s when I saw a movement from the corner of my eyes.

A girl and she is dancing.

My my now who do we have here? Never seen her before. Well it’s not like I know every one of my neighbors, but still, she is someone you just can’t overlook. To be honest, she stands out. I wonder where‘s she from? Is she alone, a student perhaps? How long did I miss this?

Gosh I don’t normally ogle at girls at my neighborhood, too personal…..to close to home. But there’s something about her that makes me want to stare. Come on be a good girl now and turn around…..yeah that’s it turn around. A little bit …a bit more…. Oh come on give me a break. Turn….. Turn….. Turn….. Turn…..I COMMAND YOU TO TURN AROUND!! Calm down she will turn when-.

The girl did an excellent one leg spin and stopped right in front of her balcony doorway. Laughing and talking animatedly on the phone. I just stared. She had shoulder length black hair pulled into a messy loose ponytail, big eyes and brown skin. She is so different …so foreign ….. fresh! Oh Yes! There it is my beautiful inspiration right there in front of me……. I can use her ! Look she is someone I wound never have thought about, a fresh start …new and unexpected ……Her !!!

Now that I see her, I quickly scramble back to my room, grabbed my sketching kits and ran back to the balcony, afraid of loosing her. Why? I really don’t know.

I observe her first, notice how she played with her ponytail, the way she placed her body on her balcony railing, the way she would scrunch up her face before bursting out laughing.

Yes this is what I need, I can write about a struggling lonely comic artist whose latest comic is inspired by a stranger girl. Yes I see it now, a story about a girl who had absolutely no idea, that an artist is using her to create a comic that will eventually become famous best seller. Why does this sounds familiar again? Oh who the hell cares, I just need a tiny motivation and I can kick start anything. It’s not a crime right? I mean lots of people write about random people they met, so this shouldn’t be any difference.

I watched her hang up and lazily drag her feet back in her room and slumped down on her cushy pillow by the table. She wiggled about on her pillow before grabbing a thick book, but not before scratching her left butt cheek first. I chuckled when I drew the exact replica of her action on my drawing pad.

When I looked back at the many pieces of rough sketches on the floor next to me, I notice she is not the typical prettiness my country is most familiar with. Her brown skin and facial features is different from my people. Yet she stands out to me…..just few minutes, watching her, I knew she was special. I glance back up and was disappointed when I spot the empty pillow.

Patience man ….she will come back …right?

I waited. Where is she? Come on I haven’t got the whole day ……actually I do.

I was about to stretch my body when my phone started to ring.

No way! I’m getting that now. Not while I still need a few more sketches.

But the maddening ring tone had me on my last nerve. With one final glance at her balcony, I walked back in …..Defeated by my own blasted phone…….

TBC……..

All in a day's work

2009-08-28T06:44:00.000-07:00

This picture ....well it really reflect what i do at home all the time LOL

comment plz ...it helps me improve

Evening drizzle

2009-07-14T00:52:00.000-07:00

Evening drizzle

Little diamonds drips from the window pane
Making tiny splash as it hits the floor
Cold air swirls through the window
Curtains blows from the gentle breeze
Muffled thunder rattles the small water puddle

A shiver runs through my body
As my feet touches the wet grass
Cold mud waits calmly for the unlucky feet
Little diamonds drips from the window panes
As I walked in the evening drizzle

hah not very good but just came up with this while wathing the rain just minutes ago.......

image taken : http://fineartamerica.com/images-medium/water-droplets-cher-odum.jpg

Colorful Summer Heat

2009-07-08T07:49:00.001-07:00

Please tell me what you think about my art....rate this picture by clicking on the reaction button......

I’m just an invisible ugly follower.

2009-07-01T09:20:00.000-07:00

“Do you mind! I’m busy!” Ana snapped at me, her angry brown eyes narrowed and her cute nose flaring a little.
“Whoa! Gosh- I’m sorry Madam!” I said jokingly, holding both my hands up in surrender. Ana didn’t reply but kept her glare at me. And I knew she was serious. I should know better. Suddenly Ana snapped her head around at the sound of the library door opening.
I watched her, then the door. A short girl with long curly hair walked in through the door, barely looking at our way. When I looked back at Ana, she was already back on doodling her magazine. I notice she do that every time she is anxious about something.
“Is she expecting someone? Naah! She always tells me everything-so that must no be it”. I thought as I pulled out my drawing pad from my bag. Ana is like my sister, although many people would disagree with that. Well not because how differently we look but more on how she treats me.
Well most people would say, what we have is more of a leader-follower relationship. Ana being the pretty and famous leader and I am the invisible ugly follower. A missed matched pair, but I know we are so much more than that. We are sisters. Really!. But people tell me Ana don’t treat me right, that she is bossy and sometimes abusive. Oh no ! Not that type of abuse but more of the demanding and bitchy type. But despite what people tell about us, I know deep down she never means any of it. She only acts like that at school but when we are alone, she is a teddy.
I glanced at Ana who was furiously sketching a big moustache on a Nivea model’s face. Hey eyes looks determined and her tongue slightly poking out at the corner of her mouth. Aw isn’t that cute! Now that’s the face she puts on whenever we are alone, away from the prying eyes.
I turned my body towards her, my back resting against the wall. This way she can’t see what I’m drawing. Oh yeah I love Ana dearly but every girl has a secret. Besides Ana would probably laugh at my face if she knew. I’m after all her invisible ugly follower.
I didn’t know how long I sat there sketching away on my pad. But I’m almost done with it. Actually the only reason I’m even drawing at school is because I want to capture everything. I peeked at Ana, she had long “destroyed” the model’s face and was now coating her long fingernails with her latest color. Electric Blue.
Sometimes I didn’t know how she manages to sneak in her nail polish better yet why she paints her nails at the library. I’m not trying to make her look bad, but she hardly touches any books better yet even reads any.
Again it got me wondering, just why is she here today?.
I quickly looked at my watch. It flashed 3.30pm. I quickly made myself comfortable in my chair, flipped a new page on my drawing pad and waited. Eyes eagerly watching the library door.
A tall and heavenly looking man of my dreams walked in. His dark brown hair shining under the library’s fluorescent light making him stand out from the rest of the people standing near by. He stood at the entrance as he casually ran his long fingers through his dark hair. My heart skipped a beat at the simple gesture. I watched him look around as if searching for someone, slowing resting his left hand on his slim hip in the process. A sexy stand that never failed to make me restless at night. I watched cautiously as he looked around again, his beautiful eyes narrowed in concentration until it stopped sharply at my direction. He turned his body and slowly made his way, I swear I nearly fell off my chair from choking on the tip of my pencil.
“Hey !! So how do I look? Gosh I hope he notices my new nail polish- it SO brings out the color of my eyes” I barely registered Ana talking to me. Actually I kind of momentarily forgot she was there. Before I could say anything in return, Ana turned away from me, quickly stood up and pulled on her short skirt. Then casually flings her light hair off her shoulders. She stopped and turned around, her face grinning as she held two thumbs up at me. My heart was pounding hard in my chest, as I watched her turn and walk slowly towards my gorgeous prince. I was desperately hoping they are not walking towards each other, but deep down I already knew.
I watched in disbelieve as they talked – NO! Flirt with each other. Suddenly Ana stood on the tip of her toes to lean in for a kiss. I couldn’t see the rest of the kiss as my eyes filled up with tears blurring my vision. When I blinked away the tears, my eyes instantly burned the image of them kissing passionately onto my brain. I felt my heart shatter into a million pieces and the urge to cry was getting stronger by the second. I quickly shut my eyes tightly as if that would lessen the huge swell rapidly building up in my throat. I pushed the heel of my palm onto my eyes and quickly wiped away any traces of tears on my face before looking up again.
They were holding each other by the waist, staring lovingly at each other’s eyes. Ana turned to look at me and I quickly held a two thumbs up. I dare turn my eyes on my prin- NO !! Ana’s boyfriend and was not surprised that he didn’t even notice I was there. Oh well that’s why they say…I’m invisible. Nobody sees me. Not even when I’m crying out in pain.
Well I’m happy for my best friend, who am I kidding? they are perfect as a couple. Look at them it’s like a match made in heaven. What was I even thinking? I should have my mouth shoved with chili paste for even thinking about him. After all I’m just her invisible ugly follower.

Teenage Love Part 8

2009-06-14T23:43:00.000-07:00

hey sorry for the delay....i hope u enjoy this story .....

“Is it just me or Sheila was giving you the evil eye” Revathy wiggled her fingers in a ghostly manner at Viki, who frowns in return at her. They were making their way out of the Bio lab with the rest of the class.
“Oh you noticed too” Viki said sarcastically as she stole a quick glance behind her. Sheila was walking alone, a few feet behind them with her books and black box held tightly in her chest.
“Ha Ha –What I mean was why now ?, I mean she stopped after you caught her red handed with the dead butterfly last time. So what ? she took a whole year to plot out another revenge” Revathy shook her head when she saw Viki winced at the word “dead butterfly”. Suddenly Revathy stopped in her tracks and crooked her head at Viki’s direction “Wait a sec ! Did you do something to her?”
“What of course not! I mean she do that to everyone- that’s her –um-nature” Viki said as she tucked her imaginary hair behind her ear and force a smile at Revathy, who just shrugged and said “Uh huh”.
As they turned around the corner, Revathy let out an exasperated sigh when they spotted Roshan winking at a junior girl. “Did you see that! That dude- he seriously needs a life” Revathy said as they watched the Junior girl grinned, her face flushed as she waved good bye at Roshan.
“Hey I got to go pee-“Viki begin, “Yeah sure go ahead” Revathy collects Viki’s books from her arm and followed the rest of the classmates down the hall.
Viki quickly made a bee line to the girl’s washroom. She was desperate to go to the toilet during the class but Mrs. Drew a.k.a Pop Quiz Nutter decided it was time for another pop quiz, which means no toilet breaks no matter how desperate you are.

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Viki hummed a song to herself as she finished up her “business” in the toilet. When she realized she was alone, she immediately got caught up with ANTM theme song. Somehow that song never fails to cheer her up.
After flushing, Viki pulled opened the cubicle door, when she caught her reflection on the mirror she immediately did her “Tyra Banks stand” at the doorframe, pushed her head back and slowly bringing her head back down “model style” before “cat walking” to the sinks.
“You wanna be on top?" Viki said mimicking Tyra before casually flipping her imaginary hair off her shoulder. Then when back to humming ANTM theme song while washing her hands. Viki looked up while drying off her hand, pucker her lips and threw a seducing fly kiss at her own reflection.
She chuckled to herself before turning to leave. Her smile immediately halting on her face as her eye came in contact with the small figure standing at the entrance of the toilet. Sheila stood there with her lips pursed tightly and her wild eyes watching Viki’s every move.
“Oh gosh- uh- I didn’t see you there” Viki said her hands automatically tugging at her tie. Viki mentally kicked herself for her shaky voice.
They both stood there staring at each other for awhile, Sheila didn’t reply but slowly raised her fist in front of her face. Viki braced herself for any sudden attack. But when Sheila pushed her thick glasses future up her nose, Viki relaxed (well almost).
“What am I waiting for, you know what? Leave now!” her head screamed but her body was rooted to the floor.
Shelia remained standing at the same spot, not moving an inch. That’s when Viki realized she hid her right arm behind her back.
“Oh no she’s gonna throw something at me!” Viki panicked and was about to step forward when Sheila suddenly moved. She walked slowly to Viki, her eyes intense and her face blank from any emotion. She stopped a few feet in front of Viki, Blinked before slowly turning to walk into one of the cubicle. She shot Viki a dark look before slamming the door shut.
“Ok that was weird” Viki said as she stare at the cubicle door. Viki didn’t know why she decided to wait for awhile but she didn’t hear not sound coming out of the cubicle Sheila walked into, Not even the slightest hint.
“Is she standing on the other side of the door listening to ME?” Viki suddenly felt ill at the thought and quickly made her way out of the toilet.

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William was talking to David and Roshan when he saw Viki walking into the class. She cast a quick glance at him before making her way to her seat next to Revathy.
“Those two are joint at the hip, you won’t see one without the other” Roshan said as he watched Viki and Revathy chatting away. William raised an eye brow, lately he notice Roshan been talking a lot about Revathy. He even caught Roshan staring at Revathy when he thinks no one was watching. Opposite attraction no doubt about it. The more she looks disinterest at him, the more he stares at her.
William sulks when she spotted Sheila walking into the class, her eyes locked on Viki as she mumbled something under her breath. Suddenly she broke her gaze on Viki and turned her head towards Will, as if sensing he was looking at her. When she notice him looking back she turned a bright shade of pink before slowly grinning at him. William quickly smiled back before turning in his seat facing the opposite direction.

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“As you all know, Prefect Election Day is coming up-we got lots of work to do people” Mr. Jacob their Prefect community advisor said in a very girly high pitched voice. He clapped his hands in front of him before jutting his hips to the right, and placing his right hand on the hip.
“So hurry up ! Hand me the activity list , Viki watched as Nadia hurried to hand over the paper. “I’m going pair you up, you and your partner are responsible for the jobs I give YOU” He pressed on the last word before giggling to himself, “Oh I just crack myself up” he said shaking his head, his left hand cupping his left cheek. He didn’t notice that rest of the prefects didn’t join him in his joke, not that he cares anyway. After he got over laughing at his own “hilarious” joke, he sucked in a deep breath (dramatically of course) before calling out the pairs.
Viki watched as her best friend mimics Mr. Jacob’s hand-on-the-hip stand. Viki suppressed the urge to laugh out loud when she saw the shocked look on Revathy’s face when she was paired up with Roshan. Viki press her hands to her mouth to keep herself from bursting out laughing at Revathy’s dramatic dropped open jaw and hands dangling from her sides. Viki stopped laughing she realized that she is most likely going to be paired up with Will.
“Oh no not today!!” Viki’s head screamed and she was about to cross her finger when she heard her name after William’s. This time it was Revathy who was laughing at her face.
Viki sigh and glanced at William, already expecting the smug look but was surprised when she saw him was looking straight ahead at Mr. Jacob, as if waiting for his name to be called out.
Viki blinked “Wait am I missing something here!” She glanced at Reavthy who was already walking towards the smug Roshan. Then back at William, again she was surprised when he didn’t bother to look her way.
“Ok chop chop-get to work” Mr Jacob said as he clapped his hands in front of him. Viki stole a quick glance at William, this time he was reading a piece of paper passed out by Nadia. Viki waited for William to turn his head towards her, when he didn’t she felt a pang of disappointment.
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William knows he is being an asshole but he can’t help it. A tempting smile tugged at the corners of Will’s lips. He notices Viki glancing his way a few times. It was cute to watch the disbelieve and confused look play on her face. He also notes she was tugging at her tie in a dangerous manner.
“God I hope she don’t choke herself” William thought as he pretended to read the blank paper.
He just can’t resist teasing her, old habits are hard to break. He knows she has no choice but to come to him. Mr. Jacob might look “soft” but he sure as hell can throw a manly tantrum.
William glanced ahead, and smiled when he saw Roshan and Revathy already showing the early signs of war. Sometimes it’s weird how you make friends with people who reflect you.
“So what are we to do” William nearly fell off his chair when he heard the soft voice. He resists looking back at Viki who somehow managed to silently make her way to his seat.
“Oh um-we are in charge of the PA system” William said careful not to slip any hint of amusement in his voice. He quickly stashed away the blank paper into his file before moving to stand up. As he stood he saw Viki was looking everywhere else but him. Oh yeah he was definitely taunting her.
He pushed the chair back into place and walked away expecting Viki to follow him. As he walked he stole a quick glimpse at the vague reflection on the window.
He smiled mischievously when she saw Viki angrily placed her hands on her hip and stomped her foot before following him.

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“Who did he think he is- kissing and then ignoring me – so this kiss IS a joke to him” Viki thought as she stomped her feet, she ignore the surprised looks from other prefects. She watched him walking away before deciding to follow him. “Two can play the game” Viki thought.
Although her blood was boiling with anger her heart kind of felt heavy. As they walked to the PA room, Viki made sure she kept her distance from him, she notices he slowed down his pace to let her catch up with him but refused to change her pace. When they reached the PA room, Viki waited for William to open the door, waiting a few feet back arms crossed over her chest. William ignored her completely as he entered the room. He didn’t bother to open the door all the way, so when Viki stepped through she nearly collide with the door. She shot an angry look his way but it was a pointless gesture, his back was facing her.

To be continued……..

Writers block

2009-06-10T05:21:00.000-07:00

Yeah like the title said I’m kind of going through that now ….i don’t know why I can’t continue with Teenager Love Part 8 w/o getting distracted and I keep changing my ideas…..but no worries been through this before LOL

So please be patient (yeah S… I’m talking about you LOL)

P/s : The image is created by me and the poem is taken from
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1469339/writers_block_a_poem.html

Ding Dong

2009-06-07T22:56:00.001-07:00

“Ding Dong”
I woke up from a very deep slumber when I heard the door bell. It rang once and I was not completely sure if it had rung at all. Perhaps I dreamed of it. I looked down at my tummy where the forgotten story book laid. My left arm was numb from dangling behind my head and my right arm casually resting on the book. I blinked when I felt the corner of my mouth wet.
“Oh gross!!” I quickly set up, ignoring the slight ache at the back of my neck. Just as I was about to stand, I heard it again.
“Ding Dong”
I froze in mid stand, “Oh Gosh! Someone IS at the door!” I quickly dashed over to the dining room where mom kept a small mirror over the sink. I checked my reflection and frown when I saw the aftermath of my drool. I quickly washed my mouth and wiped it clean. Adjusted my hair and rushed to the door. I stopped halfway to pick up my glasses.
“Ding Dong”
“Geezz I am coming” I said to myself but I’m sure the “person” couldn’t hear me. As I walked pass the window I notice it was pouring heavily outside. Just as I reached for the door knob the lights went off. I gasped loudly but didn’t move forward to turn the knob. Something told me to give it another ring before I decide if I should open the door. The house is completely dark and silent. The humming from the old refrigerator had stopped.
I waited and was actually debating if I should look through the peephole. I finally stood on my toes and took a deep shaky breath before leaning to look in. It was pointless, outside it was completely dark. I can’t even make out if there is anyone standing in front the door.
“Of course the porch light is out too…genius “
I lean in and put my ear on the door and waited, listening to any movements outside. “Should I call out?” I wondered.
I nearly screamed when the door was banged on instead of the “Ding Dong” I was expecting.
Just as I was about to ask who it was, I heard heavy footstep retreating.
“Should I call out or should I just open the door?” I asked myself. Is it safe ? I’m alone at home after all.
But I decided to just leave it be and go look for torchlight. Besides if the “person” was someone I know and desperate they would have tried calling my name. But before I turned to leave, I once again pressed my ear to the door. Just in case I hear em coming back. I lower my breath and strain my ear to listen. It was quite difficult to hear anything aside the rain pour.
“Oh well” I said and just as I was about to push myself from the door, when I felt a large hand pressed against my head, pressing my head back to the door. Hard.
My heart skipped a beat and I was frozen shocked. I felt the hand loosen it’s grip on my head. I opened my mouth to scream but chocked when the hand gripped my neck instead. Squeezing it hard. My eyes started to water and I being to gasp from lack of oxygen. A sharp pain to the back of my head was all I felt before I hit the floor.

Teenage Love Part 7

2009-02-20T04:13:00.000-08:00

“If someone was to self claim to be the biggest fan of anything, I bet no one can compete Sheila’s fan club- the girl is crazy- she has a shrine of William for god sake- how sick is that” Revathy said as she walked beside Viki.
Viki just smiled at her friend as they entered the Bio lab.
“Oh my god- I bet she keeps a strand of his hair or something” Revathy looked bewildered for a moment; they looked at each other and burst out laughing.

The only girl in the school with the faultiest list would be Sheila’s, the girl is a walking creep-ster. And currently the only person William fears the most in school. So if you want to give William a good scare, just say her name and he would run home and hid under his bed.
Sheila was once a very timid and shy girl, probably the only girl in school who walks around with a strange black box tightly held to her chest. The only thing that gives Viki the creeps is her eyes; they are so wild and watchful above her inch thick glasses.
Those eyes seem to be watching your every move, as if challenging you to stare back. That was how Viki remembered her when she first moved to the town, she hardly sees the poor girl anywhere outside of school. Then again, Sheila would probably walk right in front of you and you won’t even blink an eye. That is how Viki vaguely remembers her until she met William. Well let’s just say that, sometimes helping someone might not always turn out to be a good thing.

William watched his friend copying his lab notes furiously while waiting for Viki to show up, her reaction this morning left him with high hopes, perhaps Viki did felt something for him….well at least he hope she does. When he heard Viki’s laughter he quickly looked up to see her entering the lab. He felt disappointed that she was so caught up in her conversation that she didn’t bother to look his way.
His eyes continued to watch Viki as she and her friend made their way across the room to their respective seats. They were giggling over something and it was starting to get in his nerves
“Is she laughing at me or what?- or did she tell about the kiss- if she did….why are they laughing….I’m sure it wasn’t that bad…was it ?” William thought as stared at Viki.
He drummed his fingers on the table as felt someone staring at him. The hairs at the back of his neck stood when his eyes landed on Sheila. He jumped slightly when he saw her stare back at him intensely with those eyes, her left hand gently stroking the black box in front of her. William quickly offered a nervous smile and a quick nod, when she slowly grinned eerily back at him; William quickly grabbed fro his notes despite his friends protest.
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Flash Back
William was chasing his friends up the stairs, that’s when he saw one of his friend, Roshan bumping hard into a small figure that was coming down the stairs, the girl shrieked as she went flying down the stairs with her books and things flying about. She landed hard, face down on the tiled floor, a few feet from where William was standing. When she lay completely still for a while, William thought she was dead or something and hurried to her side. He nearly yelped when she suddenly bolt up straight and blinked.
“Are you ok?” William asked as he slowly kneeled down beside the thin girl. He was stunned when he saw the girl; she looked like she was about to have a heart attack. Then she looked very confused and scared; her eyes were opened so wide he thought they were going to pop out of her sockets.
“Here let me help you?” he said and offered his hand. The girl looked up at him with a timid look, her eyes stayed on William’s face for a while as if registering his existence for the first time, her eyes slowly traveled down to his extended hand, then back at his face.
William cleared his troath and offered a soft smile. He patiently waited for the girl to take his hand. The girl blinked and looked around as if not believing he was actually talking to her. Then she took a long shaky breath and took his hand, and yelp when yanked her to her feet.
“Oh sorry, I didn’t mean to be too rough…..I’m just so used to helping guys off their butts you know” William chuckled and winked at the girl. The girl looked like she was about to explode when her entire head turn bright red chili. He swear he saw her glasses fog up from the heat.
“Err…sorry about bumping into you, the boys sometimes just don’t know what is in front of them, again I apologize on their behalf” William said as he kicked an invisible rock with the tip of his shoe.. His eyes caught the black box lying next to his feet. “I believe this belongs to you he said and bend down to pick up the box. The girl immediately broke out of her trance and roughly grabs the box from his hand and holds it tightly to her chest.
“Oh sorry-err what is your name?” William asked and leaned in when he only heard a small wimp out of her. “Pardon?” he said and lean in closer to her. The girl quickly held her breath and squeaked “Sheila”
“Oh that’s a pretty name….it suits you” William said as he winked at her, causing another shade of pink to brighten her pale skin. “Ok I’ve got to go- See you around Sheila” he extended his arm again to shake.
The moment he squeezed her hand gently, he swore he saw her nose sprayed blood before her eyes rolled up into her head and fell flat on her back, and all this happened before William could even blink an eye.
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Ever since then William sees her anywhere and everywhere, sometimes late at night he sees a lone figure standing outside his house looking up into his room. And he is very sure it was her. Although Sheila has never really tried talking or confessing her “love” for him, she makes sure other girls knows about it for sure.
There was once a famous rumor, a suppose freshman had a crush on William, the girl send a valentine chocolate dedication message to him, well long story short, that was the last they ever heard of that girl, rumor has it the very next month she moved to another school. They say Sheila has cast a spell on her to stay away from him, some even believes that she box she carried contains strands of that girl hair, which was used to cast her away from William.
Although William still consider the whole idea as a silly rumor even when he received mysterious cards and deep-breath phone calls at night, which William was sure it was Viki using Sheila’s name to play prank on him, until one day Viki had a black note and a dead butterfly on her desk the next morning asking her to keep distance from William. She did all this because Viki did a group discussion on their science project at his house.
It was then William took the rumor about her seriously. The more William avoided her the more he keeps seeing her around. Sometimes he even sees her waiting at the end of the hall, looking at him from behind the locker door. There was a time he caught her looking at his photo she cut out from the school magazine, smiling and chuckling on her own at the picture of him in her hands.
It could be said that she got into a lot of trouble for just trying to keep William for herself. She would plant cast away magic hocus pocus in girls bags and desk. The worse prank so far was to drive away a girl called Lillian by putting a dead toad (that she stabbed using Lillian’s favorite pen) in her school bag, just because she was joking about with him.
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Viki felt like someone was bearing a hole through her back, when she looked about her eyes immediately caught the angry glare of Sheila’s.
“Oh no….” Viki gulped as she watched Sheila tighten her grip on her black box, her eyes never leaving Viki’s.

To be continued……

Teenage Love Part 6

2008-11-16T06:14:00.000-08:00

“ ” conversation and thoughts
* * inner mind thoughts

Viki was pulling out her thick math book from her bag when Roshan walked into the class room. He casually dropped his bag on the chair and adjusted his tie before turning around to greet Viki, but was surprised to find her seat empty.
“What the …” He looked around but there was no sign of her anywhere. Now he wasn’t so sure he saw her in the first place. Just then Revaty entered the room. “Hey there hot cheeks”. Revaty rolled her eyes but smiled anyway.

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Viki walked out of the class as soon as Roshan turned to put his bag down. She silently scrambled out of her seat and out the door before he had his morning flirts with her.
“Not today ….today every boys are making me anxious” she thought
*Yeah right !! you mean every boys reminds you of William” added her sinister inner mind.
“No Way !!” Viki screeched as she shook her head roughly, totally ignoring the surprised stares of her fellow junior students walking past her.
“Ok Viki, Get a grip, you know William took his joke way to far….he freaking stole your first kiss for god sake, if anyone is to be anxious, its him!!” Viki mentally scold herself
*Riigghht!! And you just happened to NOT enjoy that kiss* added her mind sarcastically.
“Oh great now I’m officially mad” Viki exclaimed throwing her hands up in the air and curt her eyes at a young couple who was about to share their “suppose” first kiss. They immediately let go of each other and ran off in the opposite direction.

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“William you dumbass !!” her mind kept repeating as she did her morning routine check around Block C. Just as she looked over the railing she saw Roshan looked up and grinned at her. Somehow this time her heart did not skip a beat like it used to. Viki sigh loudly and waved back at Roshan.

Roshan. The name alone brings good memories and not to mention never ending buckets of drools. Roshan looks like the Hrithik Roshan, the bollywood actor. Literally. His dashing smile alone is known to make a girl pass out. His athletic body from his swimming lesson did nothing but increase his attraction to many female at River High School. Although Roshan had known to be very flirty and sexy his parents are a pain in the ass. They kind of have a restriction law suit of some kind that prevents him form dating any girl until he graduates. Oh did I also mention he is filthy rich. He is like a total package that every girls dreams about. Yet that fact never stopped him from flirting his mind off, god knows just how many kisses thought lips have stolen. “Why couldn’t it have been him who stole my first kiss!!!”.
Anyway it’s also a known fact that almost every girl in the school has a crush on him, that also includes Viki, But she keep telling herself that he is a nice decoration in her class, like a male version of Play Boy poster on the wall. But play boy or not, the way he smile and talks and even walks has never failed to race her heart beat at least little faster. Viki had always liked that he takes time to talk to her and even sometimes sits close next to her in class that she was sure had the other girls in her class cursing like a sailor. There were times she was sure he would purposely grace his hand against hers as they walk, she swore at that time her hands were sweating and she had a silly grin on her face. But oddly enough…..none of his usual gesture has any reaction on her today.
His dashing smile didn’t do any effect to her heart nor when he talks and runs his hands through his shinny black hair. She also just notice that he likes to smile every time he finished his sentences and winks at almost all the girls walking past them. His gestures seem silly now. It almost felt like he was trying to hard to get her and every other girl’s attention. Viki listen to Roshan has he made smooth and cheeky jokes, both sounding less funnier by the minute. It disappoints her that she no longer had those reactions because right now she just felt like she is talking to a normal friend and the thrill of seeing him is no longer there. As her mind was battling the reason behind these changes, her eyes looked about the surrounding behind Roshan’s shoulder. Her eyes scanned for any faulty while her ears listen helplessly to Roshan’s jabbering.
She looked past his right shoulder and in an instant her heart skipped a beat (or two). She felt her heart resumed pumping at a deadly rate as her eyes met William’s. He looked serious and that instantly made her palms sweaty and her throat dry. She kept staring at William, not realizing that Roshan had stopped talking and was turning to look behind him.
“Hey Will, What’s up man ! come here!” Roshan said as he waved William over to join them.
“What !! No NO !!! I’ve got to get the hell outta here” Viki screamed in her mind. “Whoa Viki hold up girl, you got to stay cool….its gonna look obvious if you do that….stay calm girl….you can do it !!” she thought as she casually wiped her damp palm on her skirt. When she looked up she realized William’ eyes never left her. As though watching her every move. Viki quickly tore her eyes away from William and force her attention back to Roshan.
William stood next to Roshan, who in turn put his arm around his shoulder in a brotherly manner. William watched Viki as she adjusted her tie and tucked her “imaginary” hair behind her ears. The usual sign that shows she is nervous and uncomfortable. That fact made William smile.
“So the kiss did have an effect on her” he thought as he licked his lips slowly.
Viki watched in disbelieve as William crooked a knowing smile as he casually nods to Roshan constant blabbering. Her eyes immediately dropped to his lips and watched him slowly licked his lips.
Viki gasped “OH MY GOD he is reading me like a book !!”. She cleared her throat “ I should be finishing up my checks …Block C “ err see ya “ she backed off slowly even before finishing her sentences.
Roshan looked at her in surprised then back at William, who just shrugged his shoulders “Yeah ok ! Later!” as they watched Viki walked away quickly before resuming their conversation.
Viki looked over her shoulder one last time before going up the stairs, just as she turned William looked away from Roshan and their eyes met. William winked and Viki nearly tripped over her own foot. “What THE HELL !!!”
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“This cannot be happening I have “Roshan symptoms” on William . Oh my god ! This can’t be happening because of one lousy kiss” Viki screamed mentally.
* Yeah right ….you know it was no lousy kiss * injected her inner mind.
“Stop it !!!” Viki yelled angrily while banging her fist on her forehead. The timid looking freshman froze in her mid step and her half eaten chocolate muffin fell from her gaping mouth.
Viki opened her eyes and blinked at the girl’s reaction before detecting the muffin on the floor. “Hey don’t litter !!” she said sternly and pushed past the girl to make her way to the her class.
“Gosh I just knew it ….. I now have a thing for stupid William over a lousy kiss …..and for all I know he might have done it as a joke, he knows I can’t never beat him to it”. Viki thought as she lean on the library door. “I just don’t want to be the one to feel this. Ok maybe I’m just over reacting …maybe this “Roshan symptom” is temporary….like a jumpy state we get into after getting the scare out of their lives. Something that is bond to go away….right?” Viki glance at her hands and slowly curl them into a tight fist. “I just have to put up this barrier around me that William should stay as he is …. A jerk next door and occasionally a weird friend type of guy”. Viki shoved her hands behind her back and let her back press her hands tightly against the door. She knew William since she was little, their constant fights and finding new ways to humiliate each other gave Viki a good impression or idea that William never felt more about her then just being a friend/enemy girl next door.
“But then again there was this time during the fire….she have this fade memory of William helping her to seat and perhaps even cleaning her wound …..but the thing that she is unsure was his reaction ….he looked worried and caring ?” or was that all the smoke-“
Her thoughts were interrupted when the library’s back door opened and Sheila stepped out giggling and dragging someone behind her. As Sheila reached around the corner her smile fade and pretended not to notice Viki standing right in front of her. Sheila is one of the reason Viki believe liking William is not going to be easy or any in way is a good idea.

To be continued……

Teenage Love Part 5

2008-09-06T04:30:00.002-07:00

Viki didn’t stop running. Not even when her mother was yelling at her to keep it down, she dashed up the stairs slammed her room door and collapsed against it. She slides down the door, weak and aching from running for so long. Viki too a deep shaky breath to calm her heart. Tears were forming in her eyes from her side aches. As she lay on the floor, she slowly brought her fingers to touch her lips. She could still feel his lips on hers, warm and soft, slightly moist.
She licked her lips “I can still taste him” she thought and immediately regretted the gesture. She roughly wipes her mouth with the back of her hand, as her anger boils her nerve.
“How dare he!! That was my freaking first kiss!! Why would he play this – this ….cruel joke on me?” angrily she punched her school bag.
“I was saving it for someone special, not that jerk……or was it him…NO NO he …..WILLIAM U IDIOT!!” she angrily shook her fist in the air as if talking to him in person.
“Viki?” a voice called with a single knock on the door. Viki yelped and jumped up from the shock.
“Oh my god is it HIM ?, Oh SHIT Oh SHIT” Viki whispered fiercely and ran around the room in panic when she heard the knock again.
“Oh my gosh …oh my gosh!! I don’t wanna face him now!!! Maybe I could climb down the balcony..yea-“ her thoughts were cut short when the room door opened and her nanny poked her head through the door.
“Viki I kno- Err what you doing?” she asked as she watched Viki standing at the balcony with one leg over the railing.
“Viki are you ok ? You seems upset so- OH MY GOD ARE U TRYING TO KILL YOUSELF- GOOD LORD DON’T-” Oh yeah her nanny is known for being a nervous wreck, it’s one thing that Viki and her nanny has in common.
“Oh No NO !! Nana calm down…..I just- I thought, well …Will…” her lips started to cover and tears were suddenly forming in her eyes, blurring her vision
“OH NANA WILL THE IDIOT KISSED ME!!!” she blurred out as the tears flow down her cheeks.
“Oh there, there child” Her nanny pulled Viki into her arms “I’m sure he didn-WHAT DID YOU SAY?” She jerked Viki at arms length, her eyes wide and her mouth shaped in a big ‘O”.
“He kissed you? Wow ….well it’s about time…He-“
Viki wiped her eyes furiously “Wait What??” she asked as she eyed her nanny closely. “What is THAT suppose to mean?”
“Oh its nothing…well its just a kiss so why don’t you-“ Nana immediately looked away from Viki and started to straighten the already straighten apron, looking everywhere else but Viki. The usual gesture she did when she knows she had accidentally spilled a secret.
“Nana what is That suppose to mean? Viki asked again “And its not Just a kiss it was my first kiss-the kiss I was saving for my prince charming in shining armor” Viki said with a daze look on her face as she picture her prince charming walking towards her with his red cape flying behind him from the gentle breeze.
As he removed his helmet, she saw it was William, smiling- WAIT WHAT!!! EWWWWW” Viki immediately shook her head to break the image from her head.
“Well it’s very obvious he likes you very much, and well- you being a nook on the head didn’t help either” her nanny said with amused look on her face.
This time it was Viki who looked at her nanny like she grew a second head on her shoulder.
”Will like -he doesn’t like me, we fight all the time and besides he hates me, Nana he is always pushing my buttons” Viki said as she walked to the window. After a brief pause she let out a big sigh.
“Nana, that was no just-for-fun kiss, and it was very- well – er- intense” Viki said as she fumbled with her uniform. “I mean it felt really real- like no joke type-I kind of doubt it was a joke-but still Nana- I – I never felt anything more about Will before” Viki said and tensed when she saw William’s car pulled a stop at his house.
She gasped and hides behind the curtain as she watch him climbed out the car. He looked up at her direction, frowns deeply and then fumbled in his pocket and pulled out his hand phone. Less then a minute, her phone was vibrating in her pocket. Viki yelped and pulled out her phone, her screen flashed “WILL THE DORK”. Viki dropped the phone on the bed.
“Viki dear, why don’t you talk to him. I’m sure it was –“
“Nana, I just nervous now I dun won’t to say something I might regret- I need to think” Viki said softly and hugged her nanny.

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Viki sat on her bed as she dried her hair, her phone was blinking blue light. “6 missed calls” flashed at her screen. She flipped the phone close and threw it on the desk.
Viki sigh and collapsed on her bed. Her hand moving up and down by her side as if she was making a snow angle. Her left finger brushed against something thin. She frowned and picked up her pillow, underneath laid a picture.
Viki picked up the picture and lightly outline the figure with her fingers. A small sigh left her lips as she brought the picture to her chest. She pressed it tightly against her chest, hoping it would somehow melt into her aching heart.
As she plummets back down the bed and closed her eyes, her mouth softly called out his name.
“Roshan”

Teenage Love Part 5

2008-09-06T04:30:00.000-07:00

Viki didn’t stop running. Not even when her mother was yelling at her to keep it down, she dashed up the stairs slammed her room door and collapsed against it. She slides down the door, weak and aching from running for so long. Viki too a deep shaky breath to calm her heart. Tears were forming in her eyes from her side aches. As she lay on the floor, she slowly brought her fingers to touch her lips. She could still feel his lips on hers, warm and soft, slightly moist.
She licked her lips “I can still taste him” she thought and immediately regretted the gesture. She roughly wipes her mouth with the back of her hand, as her anger boils her nerve.
“How dare he!! That was my freaking first kiss!! Why would he play this – this ….cruel joke on me?” angrily she punched her school bag.
“I was saving it for someone special, not that jerk……or was it him…NO NO he …..WILLIAM U IDIOT!!” she angrily shook her fist in the air as if talking to him in person.
“Viki?” a voice called with a single knock on the door. Viki yelped and jumped up from the shock.
“Oh my god is it HIM ?, Oh SHIT Oh SHIT” Viki whispered fiercely and ran around the room in panic when she heard the knock again.
“Oh my gosh …oh my gosh!! I don’t wanna face him now!!! Maybe I could climb down the balcony..yea-“ her thoughts were cut short when the room door opened and her nanny poked her head through the door.
“Viki I kno- Err what you doing?” she asked as she watched Viki standing at the balcony with one leg over the railing.
“Viki are you ok ? You seems upset so- OH MY GOD ARE U TRYING TO KILL YOUSELF- GOOD LORD DON’T-” Oh yeah her nanny is known for being a nervous wreck, it’s one thing that Viki and her nanny has in common.
“Oh No NO !! Nana calm down…..I just- I thought, well …Will…” her lips started to cover and tears were suddenly forming in her eyes, blurring her vision
“OH NANA WILL THE IDIOT KISSED ME!!!” she blurred out as the tears flow down her cheeks.
“Oh there, there child” Her nanny pulled Viki into her arms “I’m sure he didn-WHAT DID YOU SAY?” She jerked Viki at arms length, her eyes wide and her mouth shaped in a big ‘O”.
“He kissed you? Wow ….well it’s about time…He-“
Viki wiped her eyes furiously “Wait What??” she asked as she eyed her nanny closely. “What is THAT suppose to mean?”
“Oh its nothing…well its just a kiss so why don’t you-“ Nana immediately looked away from Viki and started to straighten the already straighten apron, looking everywhere else but Viki. The usual gesture she did when she knows she had accidentally spilled a secret.
“Nana what is That suppose to mean? Viki asked again “And its not Just a kiss it was my first kiss-the kiss I was saving for my prince charming in shining armor” Viki said with a daze look on her face as she picture her prince charming walking towards her with his red cape flying behind him from the gentle breeze.
As he removed his helmet, she saw it was William, smiling- WAIT WHAT!!! EWWWWW” Viki immediately shook her head to break the image from her head.
“Well it’s very obvious he likes you very much, and well- you being a nook on the head didn’t help either” her nanny said with amused look on her face.
This time it was Viki who looked at her nanny like she grew a second head on her shoulder.
”Will like -he doesn’t like me, we fight all the time and besides he hates me, Nana he is always pushing my buttons” Viki said as she walked to the window. After a brief pause she let out a big sigh.
“Nana, that was no just-for-fun kiss, and it was very- well – er- intense” Viki said as she fumbled with her uniform. “I mean it felt really real- like no joke type-I kind of doubt it was a joke-but still Nana- I – I never felt anything more about Will before” Viki said and tensed when she saw William’s car pulled a stop at his house.
She gasped and hides behind the curtain as she watch him climbed out the car. He looked up at her direction, frowns deeply and then fumbled in his pocket and pulled out his hand phone. Less then a minute, her phone was vibrating in her pocket. Viki yelped and pulled out her phone, her screen flashed “WILL THE DORK”. Viki dropped the phone on the bed.
“Viki dear, why don’t you talk to him. I’m sure it was –“
“Nana, I just nervous now I dun won’t to say something I might regret- I need to think” Viki said softly and hugged her nanny.

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Viki sat on her bed as she dried her hair, her phone was blinking blue light. “6 missed calls” flashed at her screen. She flipped the phone close and threw it on the desk.
Viki sigh and collapsed on her bed. Her hand moving up and down by her side as if she was making a snow angle. Her left finger brushed against something thin. She frowned and picked up her pillow, underneath laid a picture.
Viki picked up the picture and lightly outline the figure with her fingers. A small sigh left her lips as she brought the picture to her chest. She pressed it tightly against her chest, hoping it would somehow melt into her aching heart.
As she plummets back down the bed and closed her eyes, her mouth softly called out his name.
“Roshan”

Teenage Love Part 4

2008-08-08T00:37:00.000-07:00

William didn’t’ feel like going to school since the last confrontation , he felt too depressed to wake up and look at Viki and worse getting tangle up in his silly daydream again. When his maid knocked on the door and politely asked him to get ready for school, he just pull his blanket higher above his head and went back to sleep. After 10 minutes he could hear his mom screaming from downstairs.
“You have exactly have 15 minutes to get up or you will be sorry Will.”
Having no better option he forced himself off the bed and drag what weighted like 1000 pounds feet to bathroom. 10 minutes later he was ready and restlessly hung his backpack on his right shoulder and headed downstairs.
His mom was just about to slip out the door when she saw William sat on the couch.
” Well aren’t u a good boy now. Hush now go and have your breakfast and hurry along to school” said his mom in a very joyful singing voice.
William entered his dining room and saw his maid plastered a very warm smile on her winkled face. “Coffee as usual” and pour a cup full of coffee for him. William smiled and smelled the fresh coffee. “My sole energy boost” he thought and gulped down the drink.
He got into his maroon car turn on the engine. He was just about to back out the car when he heard, his maid called. He rolled down the window and saw Viki grinning from ear to ear beside his maid.
“So sorry! I am so not in the mood to walk today and plus my mom punished me to walk because I broke her statue” Viki said as she buckled her seat belt.
William smiled and drove to school. Every time William looked at her she will have the same cute smile on her face. He wishes she stop doing that coz he can’t concentrate in driving, but then again he don’t want her to stop either.

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William and Viki both were walking to the Mrs. Marino’s office. As usual they broke into fight in the middle of the lab class. They of course broke a test tube and a glass rod. They were going to get a long detention despite being a prefect. Where else have u heard of prefects getting detention for breaking lab stuff and for choking each other
“Why did I even bother to ask you for help ?” Viki frowns as they made their way down the stone stairway.
“Well if you just listen to what I have to say-then this won’t be happening?” William said as he knocked on the mid-night painted door.
“Well excuse me for trying to be-“ Viki’s words were cut short, when they heard a stern voice said “Come In”
After 15 minutes of long lecture, they walked out the room feeling rage with anger and drenched with Mrs. Marino’s saliva.
“Ewww….I so gonna soak myself in “Dettol” Viki said as she walked side by side with William. William just smiled and watched Viki wiping her face with her blue handkerchief. It’s just amazing how fast they become friends again when just while ago they were at the brink of tearing of each others head.

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“Its late you wanna go home with me?” William asked as they took their stuff out of their locker. He always knew he can never stand mad at Viki long. She looked up and smiled at him.
“Sure thank you very much” She said with a smile. They drove home in silence. The whole time Viki kept looking at the road. “Stop” she yelp suddenly. William stepped on his brakes and looked around. “What-what happened?”. He said as he looked at Viki. His eyes widened in shock.
“Oh nothing, just u know the game I play-she said pointing at the direction where Viki always plays her balancing game.- I thought we could try it out- u know just for fun?”.
She said looking a bit shy. William stares at her for a second before he unbuckled his seat belt.
”Ok if u wanna!” he said in fake “whatever” voice as he got out the car. He watched as Viki tried to balance her way at the edge of the sidewalk and chuckled as he watched her slip off the edge. She looked up and said: “Hey why don’t you try?”. William shook his head but Viki was already pulling him by the arm.
“Just follow me” She said as she put his left arm on her shoulder. William some how was stunned from touching her. It felt awkward. But he followed her, he felt what she felt. Fun. He followed Viki to the playground. Where there they tried to balance on the thin wood plank, it looks like the once the gymnastic uses. He felt it was harder to balance on it as it was much thinner and higher from the ground and his feet were too big. Viki giggled as she watched William tried to hold on to the plank like a monkey. Viki joined him on the plank when she felt pity for him. She giggled as she holds his hands to guide him. Suddenly he missed a step and tumbled forward into Viki’s arms. They stood hugging each other on the plank like idiots. Until Viki cleared her voice and pulled away. They stare at each other for a minute before William pulled Viki back into his arms again.
Then pulled his head back just a little to kiss her on the forehead. Then he slowly kissed his way to her lips. The kiss was passionate and long. By the time he pulled free they were both breathing hard. It was Viki who broke the hug and jumped down the plank. She looked confused, she open her mouth to say something but thought better of it and ran home.
Leaving William stunned and confused. He tried to call her the very night but she won’t pick up the phone.
William sat on his bed feeling confused and hurt by Viki’s reaction.
“Didn’t she like me?’ “Why did she run off like that?” “Did I hut her feeling?”. His head filled with millions of question and his heart aching for answer. Confused and hurt William slipped into a restless dream.

Teenage Love Part 3

2008-08-07T23:52:00.001-07:00

Their faces inches way when suddenly ……
she burst out laughing as she tries to mimic his face expression. It took William awhile to realize that it was all a gag. A cruel joke. Annoyed he pushed Viki off him and sits up on his bed. He can’t believe it backed fire at him. It his heart ached and he was sure it was not because he lacked air just now. Viki was laughing the whole time. She dropped on her side and trying to catch her breath. High mocking laughter that pissed him off even more. Willam sat at the edge of the bed, his face flushed and face bitter. Viki stopped laughfing (well almost anyway) when she noticed, he was serious. She tried to pat his shoulder to comfort him, he jerks his body away. It kinda stung her a bit but she ignored it and tired to make the funny face.
“Oh come on William it “was” funny she said. She crawled to sit beside him.
“Well I mean… why in the world do want me as your partner right?
She waited for an answer but decided to continued when he did not respond
“I mean we always fight and all right….we can’t even be in the same room without yelling at each other?”.
Then he looked up, his face serious as ever, he looked straight in the eye. He looked away and took a deep breath.
“Well it won’t hurt to try- I mean I do want you to be my partner” with that he pushed her onto the bed and lay on top of her. This time it was Viki who was blur and panicked.
Before Viki had chance to say anything, he lean in and crushed his lips on her. The moment she felt the lips touch hers, Viki shivered. She could feel him moving his lips against hers. It felt so needy and hungry, like the kind that seems like lust. His grip became gentle and the kiss was getting heat-ty. She was about to faint from lack of air when William finally pulled away. They stare in silent and he quickly got off her. William spoke up in a soft voice.
“I’m sorry I didn’t mean to do that- I was-I-I was”.
He couldn’t think of any good reason to explain and he also had this strong feeling that Viki was going to slap him any moment. Then he looked up to see Viki still lying on the bed with her eyes close. He moved closer thinking something had happen to her. Then she heard her giggle softly. She opened her eyes and looked at him. Then she said “Wow” and sat up so quickly that William nearly fell off the bed.
“You are so –so-much in big trouble” Viki said darkly and gave him the coldest stare he never seen before. He had to admit he felt like his gonna be in ICU sooner then expeted. Then she quickly and fiercely stretched both her hand and shoves him hard on the chest. William yelped as he fell backward on to the floor and his head hit the floor.

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“William!-oh my god – William are you ok?!. I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to shove you that hard-I mean you were sleeping and all-and when u didn’t wake up –so-are you alright?.
He heard Viki’s panicked voice from above. When William opened his eyes he saw Viki looking down at him from the bed.
“Yeah” then he sat up. He looked around a bit disappointed that it was all a dream. “WHAT THE HELL!!!” he brain scream in frustration. He seriously felt his heart crushed at the realization that it was all a dream. A cruel and very vivid dream. He heaves a sigh and shook his head.
“Is everything alright?”
Viki asked and offered her hand. William nods his head and took her hand. She smiled as he stood up. When he looked at the sweet smile he just couldn’t help but smile back.
“AM I so boring that you just have to fall asleep” she asked and chuckled. William sat on the bed and laughed. “No, it’s the subject that bores me to death” he said and reached for his notes.
”Yeah-you are right-I mean why can’t it be more interesting –like animal behavior or even a field trip- uh. Viki said as she tucked her black locks behind her left ear.
William looked aback at the suggestion, it felt like his dream was coming true!. He was just about to say “or human breeding” when Viki’s handset rang “Opps I did it again”. She frowns and answered the phone. He watched her nod a several time before hanging up. She looked at him and said “I have to leave. Mom needs my help-so same time tomorrow?. She asked as she packed her things.
“Good night William –she smiled-and oh yeah sweat dreams-and closed the door. William flopped on the bed feeling stupid and much thwarted.
He closed his eyes and swore he felt her on top of him…her warm breath on his face.

Teenage love Part 2

2008-08-07T22:58:00.000-07:00

At sharp nice o’clock there was a soft tap on the door. He opened the door and saw Viki standing with two thick Sciences text books in her arm. He grinned but Viki ignored him while playing with her hair. He stepped aside to let her in his room. He noticed Viki wore a simple sugar brown t-shirt and a short pants just two inch above her knee. He soft pony tail bobbing behind her as she walked past him. She entered his room and quickly she sat on his bed and opened the pages she book had marked.
It’s almost 11.00 pm and they were still jotting down points from his and her books. Although William was aching for a break for the last an hour, viki didn't seems to get the hint. Sometimes he wonder if she does that on purpose. Finally William yawn
“Why can’t they give us more interesting project to work on instead of this lame molecule thingy” he said and lay on his bed.Stretching his well tonned arms and legs.
“Like what?” Viki asked as she scanned the book for more points.
“You know like....animals behavior or more like outdoor activity” he said still looking at Viki who asually flipped open a new page to jot more points. Then he looked down to his book and added softly.
“Or on how human breed” he watched as a small smile curved up Viki’s lips but her eyes still locked on the book.
“Sound interesting” she said a while later. William took this chance to play cheeky.
“Lets say we do have assignment on that subject-and we are given chance to choose a partner-um- who would you choose? Then quickly added “from our class only” hoping she wouldn’t smack the thick science book in his face.
“Well –she finally looked up from the book and lay down at the foot of the bed- well it really depends on who is really good at it” she closed her eyes and chuckled. It aught him by suprise, "whoa she is playing along?...that's the frist!!". He waited for her answer which he hoped that it was him.
When he didn't hear a reply he asked: “Well?” There was a long pause then he heared her said softly “You”
At that point William wasn’t sure if he had heard her right but one thing for sure he really felt like he wanted to jump up and scream YES !!!. But of course being the "Legendary William" he ain't gonna let that answer get away without a little tease....He gnna make her mean what she said.
“Me? Why me?” he asked innocently and still casually laying on his back look not too caring although his heart was playing the "jungle drum". Then he heard the panic in Viki’s voice.
“Why- don’t you like me?”
When he finally looked at her, he immedialty regret what he said. Her face filled with hurt and embarrassment.
“Oh- not that-I-I do want you-I mean sure” he started to mummble. He the so called "Legendary William" is mumbeling. Gosh he felt felt bad for saying that earlier. Before he had chance to sit up, Viki sat on top of him and pinned his arm above his head.
“You don’t sound so sure-her voice shaky –but I do want you –I need you now...William”.
He swear he his heart missed several beats. He stare up at Viki, his eyes wide open and his mouth part slightly at the shocking gesture. "OH MY GOD VIKI IS ON TOP OF ME !!!" his brain keeps screaming and his heart was bagging against his rib ....its actually hurting.
"I want u William Chang ....Don't u want me ?"
This time her voice low and sexy, her face inches away from him. At one point he thought he was really dreaming but when he felt her warm breath on his face he was damm sure it was real. Her hand grip on hi wrist beame tighter and her eyes was shining with lust. "OH MY GOD ...i'm GONNA FAINT!!" he swear he can't breath.
“She wants me-she wants me –she wants me” was all that was screaming in his head. He was lost in her round beautiful lustful eyes. Their faces inches way when suddenly ……
TO be continued !!!!!

In the Lift Part 4 : The Hot News

2007-03-02T09:40:00.000-08:00

Recap: Next thing I knew my high heels strap snapped and my body was loosing its balance, wearing a skirt made it worse, I didn’t have much leg space in that tight skirt to regain my balance. Then HALA LUYA!!! I fell into the murky lake water face forward. My last thought before I hit the dirty water. “This is SOOOO Not HAPPENING…..oh man is that used dipper” then splash.

Library

“Deviki I have to admit……yesterday was a disaster……” Yuwina said quitely unsure either to feel sorry,laugh or be angry. She helplessly looked at Shafinas who was looking at her with the same look.
“Geez u think……my life is RUIN!!!” I said in sarcasm. Both Yuwina and Shafinas watched as my head bobbled and slammed into the table,as if I had been drinking beer all day.
Shafinas winced. "Ooh, dat's gotta hurt."
“Nothing hurts worse then my pride…..Tell me you guys should i let my self ran over by a car or jump down from KLCC” I asked out of depressesion.
“Owh come on it can be that bad” Shafinas said a little to loud, earning a few glares from people near by.
Yuwina smiled and tilted her head to meet my red-rimmed black eyes from crying to much.
“Cheer up, look at the bright side…..ehrmm” Yuwina said as she looked at Shafinas for support.
“Yeah, I mean …um….Ah! Well think about it…..only 5 of us know about this” Shafinas said as she patted by back.
“yeah you, me,finas and the boys” Yuwina said and offered me a fresh tissue.
I lifted my head, thinking about it. “yeah you are right !” I said as I wiped my nose. “Thank god for that !”. Just as I finished saying that, I heard a voice from behind me.
“Hey Viki, Are you alright ? I heard you fell into the lake yesterday” I turned and saw Maisarah, looking like she is about to burst out laughfing. My lips trembled and my eyes begin to swell with tears before my head slamed onto the table. Again.

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The Lake

I didn’t hear myself scream when I fell in the lake. But I did hear my name yelled by two male voices. I guess my mouth was opened when I fell in because I can still taste the copper plus sour milk like taste in my mouth. I swallowed galons of the murky water and I was choking fast. I heard another splash before I felt strong arms encircle my waist, and then everything when black.
The first thing I remember was something warm and moist on my lips then it was gone. Replaced by hands on my chest around the heart area. Then again replaced by the warm and moist texture on my lips. I snaped open my eyes. Jason had his eyes closed and his mouth clamped on mine. His lips was soft and damped. I closed my eyes, “Oh My GOSHHHHHHH!!!!” my head screamed. When I opened again, I was greeted by the startled ocean blue eyes. He quickly recoved and I felt him smile despite our mouth interlocked with each other. He then winked and pulled away. “OH MY GOD !!!”
I bolted up straight, nearly hitting my head with Dave’s in the process.
“Viki !! You Ok girl Man you gave us quite the scare” Dave exclaimed, his voice stung my ears.
“Yeah I’m fine” I coughed and smiled at Dave, who then clamed down and smiled back.
“Here take this !” Dave gave me his leather coat and put it around my soaked shoulder.
“Gosh i’m such an idiot” I thought to myself.
As if on cue Dave smiled “Hey you are the only girl that can make me laugh and scare me at the sametime. Gosh you such are clumsy gal”
“Yeah, I never had a date who fell in the lake and had to give her a KISS of life before” Jason said as he smiled knowingly at the double meaning behind it. I looked away embarrassed but was giggling inside.
They helped me up.”Gosh this had to be the worse day in my life” I mummred as I shooked my head.
“Man no offence people but both of you smell like rotten fish” Dave said as he backed away teasingly.
I glanced at Jason who was also soaked and laugfing at Dave’s remark. As we started to walk, I realised sumthing was wrong, I looked down at my feet and was surprised to find my left high heel missing.
Panicked I blurted out “Hey guys where is my other shoe” I hopped in one leg looking around for the shoe. Instead of an answer, I heard a vigorous laughter followed by a clown like snort.
Both Jason and Dave was laugfing holding their sides. Face red from laughfing hard and gasping for air. I glared at them totally humiliated.
“Maybe …maybe the fish…fish has it…it might use it…..better ….then u- you” Dave said in between laughs.
“Guys I’m serious they are brand new…..” I wobbled towards them earning another round of laughter.
“Oh Gosh this HAD to be the stupidest thing I ever did. I could’t think of Nothing ! I say NOTHING that could beat this humiliating record !! MY LIFE IS RUIN !!! I’M HISTORY!!!” I screamed mentally as I watched the boys laugh till they split a C.

“Holy cow ! that has to be the worse date in the Dating History” Mai exclaimed outside the library. We got kicked out for making so much noise. Not only Mai heard about my so called date but it seems the my whole batch knows about it.
As I was telling the story (of course leaving out about Jason and the kiss), the others showed up demanding to hear the story again. Beause the story seems to have different yet at the same time loud reaction from everyone, we eventually got kicked out by the annoyed stren looking librarian.
“Viki, I know you are the clumsy type but I never knew u could go to that extend !!” Dilah chuckled.
“Geez thanks I feel MUCH better now” I sulked as I walked beside Dilah.
“Hey Viki right” Startled i looked up at a bunch of guys waving “ Watch where you are walking ! Can’t have u drinking up the whole lake! Can we now !!” they laughed and mimicked me drowing.
“Jerks !!!” I yelled my body shaking from anger. I looked up just in time to see my cousin walking towards me. Her face clearly tells me she knows about the “Hot News”.
“Viki dude, what happened” She said looking concern although her voice seems to crack with amused edge.
“Nothing unusual” I said casually trying to pull away from her death grip.
“Did she go alone ?” My cousin asked Shafinas. When she nodded , my cousin became dramatic.
"You left her! Left this poor child defenseless...all alone!" She grabbed my head and cradled it in her hands. Tears welled in her eyes not from being sad but from being over amused. She began rocking my head back and forth, as if carrying an infant, and my eyes pleaded with the gang to stop this mess. But they only shrugged and went along with it.
“Hey look on the bright side…..U are FAMOUS now !!” Cemah said and laughed, together with the gang.

In The Lift Part 3 : The Double Date

2007-02-25T17:10:00.000-08:00

Recap : “here let me” Jason said before cupping my face with his hand. I found myself studying his features, as if realizing for the first time how handsome he was, as I felt his thumb sweep across my bottom lip to wipe away the mayonnaise. "There you go." he whispered softly as he withdrew from me. OH MY GOD DID HE JUST CUP MY FACE AND WIPED MY LIP….OH OH MYGOD I’m GONNA FAINT I CAN”T BREATH” my heart was pumping so hard that I thought it was going to jump from my throat screaming OH MY GOD I’m GONNA FAINT.
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“No way I ’m going to faint now…..but I- WHO THE HELL IS THAT!!!!”
“Oh my god is that you Jason! ? What “Everrr” are u doin here?”
I just gawked at the blonde-high-light-pink standing beside Jason. She lean in gave Jason a small peck on his cheek and sat beside him, clinching to his hand. Jason who had just shaken himself from the shock cleared his throat and looked at me apologetically.
“Hey Jane um…this is Viki, Viki this is Jane”. Jason mumbled, his words barely penetrated Jane’s high squeaks as he talked. I glanced at her and was stunned when she gave me the high school-cheerleader- captain look.
“What the hell….. Why that dirty little …..” I forced a smile which I knew must have looked like “Willy Wonka’s” which by the way went unnoticed by the Jane. “Oh just great ….can’t my day just be with them both ….then again with two handsome guys…I’m sure girls won’t leave them alone……no US alone”. I thought as I watched Jane bragging about her successful audition for cover girl magazine.
“Hold on I thought this dinner was just among us three!” I practically jumped of the seat at that sudden firm voice behind me. I glanced up and saw Dave standing right behind me, looking straight at Jane. “Whoa how long has he been standing there?”
“Oh hi Dave, Oh come on, one more person won’t hurt, beside they say three is a crowd” Jane said in a flirty tone as she bobbed her eyebrows
“Nope I don’t think so, like I said the dinner is just among the THREE of us” Dave said as he placed both his hands on my shoulder. “Besides I can’t have our DATE here feelings that we didn’t keep our promise can we now?” Dave said as he brought his face next to mine. Our cheeks are almost touching. “Oh good heavens did he just said I was their date……oh my god our cheeks are touching…feels good….hehehheh…..OK OK VIKI FOKUS”.
“Oh I see ….ok then I will catch you guys tomorrow”. Jane said as she got up. “Maybe be next time you guys will take me out on a date”. With that she turned and swayed her hips as she walked out the bistro.
“Sorry about that…..I didn’t know what to do when SHE showed up !” Jason said as he ran his hand through his brown hair. “Its ok….And thank you my knight in shining armor” I said and grinned at Dave. “Wokay where the hell am I getting all this ….Oh god I don’t believe I just said that hehehe…..oh good he is smiling or else this might really look awkward” Dave smiled back and gentle lifted my left hand to his lips. “You are welcome my princess” and gently kissed the back of my hands. I sooo swear I saw love shapes in my eyes before my ass float out the seat, to the heavens. I quickly slapped my other hand to my mouth. Just in case any drool comes leaking out during my “love teleportation”. Both Dave and I burst into laughter. I glimpsed at Jason and thought for a moment there I saw jealousy in his eyes, before he replaced it with his best grin. “What was that…did I …naah it can’t be”.

We ate the rest of the dinner talking about all kind of things. Sometimes I think we really did have the same interest. In case you were wondering how it did not go the way it should. Well this is what happened.

After the dinner as we were walking back to the car park when Jason said “Hey why don’t we just take a brief walk at the lake” He said as he slipped his hands into his pocket. His eyes never leaving the ground. “A walk ….I dunno my assignment I mean I not yet start on it...May-“. “Awwh come one Viki, its just for awhile, what do you say huh?” Dave said as he winked at me. I glanced at Jason who had this adorable puppy look on his face.”OWAH MAN THAT IS SOO CUTE”. I screamed mentally, “Wokay but make it brief” Jason grinned and both said “YES MAAM”. Little did I know that was the biggest mistake I made that night.
“Hey don’t call me that, makes me sound old” I said as I watched both of them chuckled. “Ok….madam” Jason said and made a dash for it. “Prove you are not old then…madam…” Dave laughed and ran after Jason leaving me to steam.
“Why you …!!” I ran after them. For a moment I thought we were doing a couple scenes in Hindi movie, where the heroin chases after the hero during a love song clip.
“This is so NOT the drama…why the hell are we running around the lake like a couple of loons …then again this is not that bad….I mean just how many girls actually got a chance to chase after two handsome guys around the lake…the only things we missing is the background song ……..Maybe we should audition for a Hindi movie. Then all thee and run around with some “Kuch kuch hota hai” background music”. I laugh out loud at that thought in my head, instantly forgetting all the “Nos” Yuwina and Shafinas had lectured me. This first NO and the Most important….”Never ever run around in skirts plus high heels, especially if your are Not familiar with them!!”
Next thing I knew my high heels strap snapped and my body was loosing its balance, wearing a skirt made it worse, I didn’t have much leg space in that tight skirt to regain my balance. Then HALA LUYA!!! I fell into the murky lake water face forward. My last thought before I hit the dirty water. “This is SOOOO Not HAPPENING…..oh man is that used dipper” then splash.

In The lift 2 story by degi

2005-11-24T05:56:00.000-08:00

This is the sequal to "in the lift".....second part of the story...hope u enjoy it
Ok it was the most wonderful day in my life…..i mean I thought being stuck in the lift was a nightmare …a disaster and oh did I mention I even thought that I was going to die. But it turns out to be the best thing that ever happened to me. Ok when I got the letters and read it. Oh boy was my ass floating in the air…I was so happy. But…yeah I know there is always a but. It did not go the way it should. Oh yeah …deep down I knew something like this was going to happen. Let me tell u how this all happened.

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RECAP: “Ok ..what the hell just happen?” Yuwina asked as looked after Jason. “You are so gonna elaborate very single thing that happened in there, even if it takes all day” Shafinas said as she looked at the lift and then back at me. I smiled and shrugged my shoulders. As I said “Come on guys time to get going” I slipped the note in my pocket and drag them along to the exit.

The whole trip back to Ilmu was pretty annoying and well got to admit the attention was a bit fun. I mean Yuwina and Shafinas looked they were gonna explode with curiosity. “Oh come on SPILL IT !!!” Yuwina said nearly screaming. She did draw attention from a few people on the bus. “Yeah I think my head is SO gonna explode…maybe a hint ..please…” Shafinas said this time a bit louder then Yuwina. This cause few more heads to turn my direction. For a moment I thought the whole Uniten wanted to know what had happened to me in that lift with two gorgeous…delicious….heart stopping-. “Earth to Deviki !!!” . Yuwina was yelling this time, a fat boy next to her made an obvious grunt. “I will tell you when we get in our apartment room guys”. I said through my teeth as I got up.
The moment I pushed opened the door, Shafinas drag me to the hall. Where Yuwina was already sitting there grinning away. I sat there. Looked both of them and blinked like a little blur monkey I was. “Well?” Shafinas exclaimed a little frustration in her voice. Well I don’t blame her.
“So what do you think- and I haven’t read the notes yet-“ I peak with one eyes to look at both Yuwina and Shafinas. I did not dare to open my eyes the whole time I spoke, well kinda didn’t want the memory of the lift thing to slip away. “Gimme the notes !!” Shafinas and Yuwina said at the same time. Sometimes they are weird, they kinda have the same thought when it comes to gossips. Its although they are twins…well more like gossips twins. I laughed mentally as I watched them. I slowly put my hands in both the pocket and draw out the paper. Unfold the white note as it was the first note that was given to me. Hey gals got to play fair.
““Hey V
I know you must like really think I’m crazy...u know passin note like this and all. I just wanna say you were really sweet and um….well I was not comfortable to say thing face to face but I think you are really cool and I .Well if you feel the same way just gimme a miss call k. num is 012-11223330 . Btw really hope you won’t change your mind about the date. Hope you don’t mind about Jason coming along. You are my savior !!!
Love Dave”.

“Wow savior good one…..wow Viki I think he likes u..” Shafinas said and nudged me on my side. I was too lost to actually feel that. “Yeah oh my god-open the other one” Yuwina said and moved closer.

““Hi Viki
I think today will be the most interesting thing that even happed to me. I mean being trapped with you and Dave was something that even I never thought will happen. Anyway I just wanna say I really think you were the only gal I ever opened myself to. And Dave too. But the point is I don’t think you were very opened. My guess Dave is there rite?. Anyway hope I get to know you better when we go on a date together. And Dave too. Call me k …017-2721618
Kisses Jason”

“Wow this guy Kisses and the other Love…gurl what did u do” Shafinas asked. I too was wondering what I have done to make them say such a thing….well not that I’m complaining but it’s just funny.
So then nest day was shopping, well I have to agree my dressing and clothing really sucks…I mean I kinda dress a bit boyish…..but hey they still say I’m cute. Oh every time I think about it I feel like I’m about to float away. The tingling feeling just won’t go away. Then the next few days they thought me how to apply few simply make up…I mean they are treating me like I’m gonna marry this two boys…again I’m SO not complaining. The day finally came. My tummy was hive for bees. My head was spinning and my legs were suddenly felt like its was made out of jelly. “Guys I think I am going to have diarrhea” I said almost close to fainting. Both Yuwina and Shafinas burst out laughfing. “Viki calm down…..its normal” Shafinas said as she help me straighten my hair. I looked at my reflection; I wore a knee length plate jeans skirt with a matching shirt with a small pink broach. My hair was tied in a messy pony tail but hey it looks fine with my face with my long side burn twinsted in a lovely curl. I smiled and gosh was I gonna shit any moment. The temptation to run and lock my self in the toilet was very high indeed.
“Ok Viki good luck…Its 6.55 now…don’t mess up and be calm” Yuwina said and hand me my handphone. “U better make sure u keep this on all the time” Shafinas added with a motherly tone. “ok here I go…wish me luck” I said and stped out…I turn around and said “U know I could just say I have a period pain”
“March before we throw u out” both yelled at the same time….what did I tell ya..they ‘are’ weird.

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I waited at the bus stop and checking my watch for the gazillion time in a second. A handsome motor approach me, I stood there stunned. For a minute I thought it was someone else, but the moment he pushed his helmet up I saw Dave’s heart melting smile. “Jason will be waiting for us at the restaurant….His car broke down so I had to fetch my savior on my bike” he said and added with a smile. He put his helmet on and waited for me. I just stood there like an idiot and blink. I was so surprised and excited to the max. In my head this words was screaming “I GET TO RIDE ON HIS BIKE…I GET TO HOLD HIM OH MY GOD” it kept repeating I don’t know for how long, until Dave said “Viki are you ok?...are u coming?” I snapped back to reality. Oh my god I must have looked like a jerk….”Yeah” I said weakly and took the black Scorpion printed helmet from him. I was just about to climb in when he grabbed my hand and said “Don’t worry…just hold me really tight” he said. I climbed on and he guided my hands around his waist. “There hold me tight and you will be alright” he said with a handsome voice that I thought I was gonna explode with excitement. The feel of my arms around his strong abdomen was “GOOOOOD” I was in heaven coz I SO stopped breathing for the whole one minute….my hearth just gave up….. I mean…. when I was small I thought a prince would fetch me with a white horse and romantically ride away but this I tell u is more fun and more sexier then a horse ride. I was screaming “YAHOO YEAH MAN I RULE…I AM ON A DATE WITH A HOTTIE AND MY ARMS ARE AROUND HIM” in my head every time I saw girls looking at us.
We finally reached the restaurant. It was indeed were couples go. I ascend from the bike and looked at Dave. He took out his helmet and smiled at me. Ok I was officially flying. He parked his bike and headed towards me. Before he could utter a word, a voice called my name. “Viki, glad you could make it.” I turn around and saw Jason walking towards me with a dashing smile. I smiled back as I took notice of what these boys wore. Dave wore a leather jacket that hell suits the bike ride…but inside he wore a emerald coloured t with a brown khakis. Jason on the other hand wore, a sapphire t and black jeans. They both look really nice and HANDSOME …ohhh.

We talked the whole way to the restaurant where we sat near at the corner , nearest to the open sea. I notice it was less people around us. I sat in between them and they looked like they were trying hard not to blush. For a jiffy we just sat there looking at each other. Then a waiter came and asked for our order. I looked at the menu and was blur like the day I was born. I looked up stupidly at both of them. “Guys I don’t know what….i mean y not u guys choose for me” I said. Jason and Dave just smiled and looked at the menu. Then Jason murmured something and the waiter walked off.

As we talked I notice that both Jason and Dave was trying to fine out if I was going to stay any longer with any of them. But honeslty I don’t think I want to. Coz I have to some project to finish up or Pn. Pian will bite our heads off. Dave excused himself and headed towards the toilet. I looked at Jason who was looking straight back at me. The blue eyes was locked on mine. I quickly looked away and shove a mouth full of salad in my mouth. God I must have looked like the world stupidest monkey on earth. And worse I almost choked, Jason quickly pat my back gentlely and told me to take small bites. “Gosh you looked funny” he said with a smile. Again his blue eyes was locked with mine and I was lost in it. “god he is so goooood looking wow- “um Viki I think you just missed ur mouth. “huh” I snapped back and saw that I was passing my salad to my ear. “god what’s wrong with me …DEVIKI FCOUS !!!!” I scold myself mentally.

“here let me” Jason said before cupping my face with his hand. I found myself studying his features, as if realizing for the first time how handsome he was, as i felt his thumb sweep across my bottom lip to wipe away the mayonnaise. "There you go." he whispered softly as he withdrew from me. OH MY GOD DID HE JUST CUP MY FACE AND WIPED MY LIP….OH OH MYGOD I’m GONNA FAINT I CAN”T BREATH” my heart was pumping so hard that I thought it was going to jump from my throat screaming OH MY GOD I’m GONNA FAINT.

To be continued ……

The Tragic End !!

2005-10-11T04:26:00.000-07:00

Author : Deviki Prabhakaran
Rating : 7/10 (sum foul words and bad stuff)
This is just my orginal story if u don't like it dun read.....its been well dahsyat !!! so when reading make sure u read it with the whole picture in ur mind don't just read it like biasa .....read it with fun and emotion then u will get the picture .......
Feedback : i want if u don't give to much negative thoughts ......ok
The Tragic End !!
My hands trembled as I try to cup the icy cold water from the running tab water. I looked around and found not a single soul was nearby. The public toilet looked like it was deserted for a very long time. Cobwebs were hanging from every corner of the ceiling. All the cubical had the same mud green paint and some were pealing off like some gigantic creature with long strong claw scrape its way to its helpless victim. I closed my eyes and try not to think about it. I jumped again at the sound of thunder outside the public toilet every 5 minutes. I looked at the back of my hand. It was pale and I could almost see the green veins under my skin. I tried to cup the water with my trembling hands again. Yet the water never lasted long enough for me to bring up to my lips.
“What’s wrong with me ?-maybe I’m just tired-maybe it’s the weather” I thought as I took in a deep breath. I can’t stop shivering. My whole body is trembling. Suddenly I realize that I can’t remember how I actually got here. I tried to recall how I did manage to even get here, in the blinding heavy rain.
“How did I get here? What was I doing earlier? Did I have-“ My thoughts were cut short when I heard faint footstep entering the toilet. I held my breath and try to remain calm. The noise stopped and was replaced by the same silent before. I kept my eyes at the corner waiting to see who it might be. By now I was terrified. My mind was filled with thousands of questions.
“What if it is a serial killer or a rapist or THE JACKEL !!! Oh my god what am I going to do? Am I going to die Oh god save this soul?” I prayed and tip toed slowly pass the eerie cubicles. As I made my way slowly to the entrance I heard soft voices.
“Hey do you have any idea where we are?”
“No way-but this place gives me the creeps lets just go”
“No-come on you promised to wait for me- I really need to go bad-PLZZZ”
“Can we just please go somewhere else-I don’t think THIS place is any good”
“Plz, Janet I’ve been waiting to long-I can’t hold it any longer”
“But- haven’t u heard any rumors about THIS place?”
The moment I heard Janet girl said that I stopped dead on my tracks. “What is she talking about?-what rumors-I don’t even recall this place”. I held my breath and try to listen to the Janet girl has to say as the thunder roared outside.
“What rumors?”
“Once there was this tragic thing happened in this very place. Do you remember the lonely route we passed by before we came here? That was where the whole thing started.”
“Oh my gosh do u mean the legendary Jackel-the serial killer-oh my gosh-what happened here?”
“Yeah the Jackel ! People said this is where the most brutal and unmerciful murder ever happened. A woman was murdered here in this very place. The Jackel, he followed her through that route. And when the time is just right, he crushes her skull with his huge hammer, u know the one he use to kill people with. I bet that women never knew what hit her.”
“Oh lord that poor woman!!”
“Then later he dragged her bloody body to this place where he did the worst things. I don’t think he ever did that to any of his other victims. But hers was the worst case ever.”
“What did he do?-OH GOD!!!”
“I heard that he bashed her up her face so that the police would have hard time to identify the body. He bashed her up pretty bad, the police did have hard time man. He then used his long knife, u know the one that we use to slide and chop meat.”
“OH MY-“
“Yeah he used that knife and wrote “I SINNED” on her chest. I tell u he tore most of her body skin with his knife. Cut off her tongue and chopped off all her fingers. Poked two huge hole in her palm and hung her from the ceiling of the last cubical.”

I was shocked from what I heard. “How could a man kill a woman with such fury and hate? What have that woman done to deserve that kind of death. This-“

“Oh my god-Did the police ever found out who that poor soul was?”
“Yes, her name was Molina Jeered, a local reporter who published about the JACKEL to the public. I heard she was the last victim of his before the police caught him for-“

I gasped when I heard my name. The voices seems far away as I try not to faint. “This is impossible-I’m not dead I’m right here no-this is not happening no- not to me – oh god not me” My heart screamed as I made my way to the sink. My legs felt weak and my hands trembled. I looked up at the mirror and watched my reflection. My tears filled my eyes and ran down my cheeks. It was in blood. I watched as blood slowly oozed out from my nose, eyes and ears. The sharp pains form the now visible cuts and swollen areas were unbearable. Soon my face was dripping with thick blood and it slowly decomposed in front of my now lifeless white eyes. I looked down at my hands and saw the blue black punched wound in both my middle palms slowly becomes painfully visible. My fingers fell like twigs into the sink. I heard the cracking of my skull as the words “I SINNED” was rewritten, as if there was an invincible knife craving its way on my pale chest painfully. I watched as my tongue slowly rip and fall into the bloody sink along with my fingers. I looked back the mirror and screamed as every thing came back to me.
“Oh my how co-OH MY GOD WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?”
“Shit! LETS GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE Man !!!”
The last cubicle door made an eerie squeaking noise as it was pushed open by a rough pale hand. The noise echoed in to the hollow night. “NO this is impossible” I screamed as I watched in horror as the Jackel walked towards me. His cold eyes narrowed and his broken lips curved into a wicked smile. He swigged his blood dripping gigantic hammer over his head and said;
“Hello Molina!!”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”

Teenage Love !!!

2005-05-29T04:28:00.000-07:00

Viki was walking on the edge of the sidewalk apparently trying to steady herself and at the same time trying to balance her water bottle and her thick math text book on her head .She loves doing this on her way back home from school .She even tries to persuade her mother not send either her driver nor her maid (more like her child hood nanny)to fetch her from school .She kept her concentration even more since she was keen to go past the line she had failed to cross the other day .When she was about to put her left foot on the line when she head a car honk.
It was so loud that she slipped her foot and that costed her bottle and her text book to fall but regains her balance. She jerks her head to find a maroon Honda still honing at her .She glared at the owner of the car .William Chang flash his goofiest smile and waved good bye and drive away leaving Viki with black smoke.” I’m so gonna get him” She picked put her stuff and ran back home.

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The moment she reached her house she saw him outside his house grinning at her.
“Its very refreshing isn’t it Viki” he said took in a deep breath with his eyes closed as if it was the first time he ever took a breath .Viki took this opportunity to throw a small stone she found on the street on her way back home .She threw it and it landed right on top of his black shinny hair. He jumped backward as if someone shoved him.

Viki laugh and ran in her house before William had anything to do or say.”Sucker” Viki said and hopped up the stairs to her room. When she entered her room Viki could not help but laugh hard .She took a pink pen from her pocket and crossed a big ‘X’on her calendar. She keeps track of her tricks she played back on William. “Looks like I’m the winner!” Viki said to herself.
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William Chang and Viki has been friend most off their life.Ok more like a long time enemy/friends kinda relationship. William is Chinese while Viki is an Indian .They live next to each other .They are both rich and hates each others guts. They love to compete with each other. Still Viki and William do not bring their hatred so much that they could kill each other but they do occasionally thinks about burial ways of killing each other, only that they don’t show it in action. So far.

They are now 17 years old and attend the same school. River High School near their home. In fact they attended the same school since they were six. They have been trough a lot embarrassing each other throughout their life even now!

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William walked into his room and jumped on his bed .He has a silly smile on his face. He knew he acted silly in front of Viki today, but he can’t help it. Secretly William had some how grown to like Viki ever since he was 12. He never shows it though, that’s why he always irritates her so that he could have the chance to talk to her. Ok more like pushing her button. Somehow his feeling has grown a lot stronger, he feel much confused about his new feeling .He feels terribly jealous when Viki speaks to other boys .He feels happy and even more alive when she is around . This feeling grew stronger when the incident that took place at the end of last year, when one of his school labs was on fire. Everybody manage to get out safely but some how Viki and Anisnadia were nowhere to be seen .William could not describe what he was going through .He kept praying that she will be alright and hope nothing happens to her .He just couldn’t keep still and at some point he actually wanted to run in the burning building and safe her even if it could cost him his life. The moment he saw Viki dragging the unconscious fat Malay girl out of danger. He was relieved that he could have kissed her then. He actually helps her to sit down on grass with out picking up a fight. He even took the trouble to clean her wounded leg and comfort her .He felt lucky because she was actually half unconscious the whole time. He knew if she knew he had did all this she would think he had gone crazy and avoided him. Sometimes It hurts when she say she hates him. He knew she didn’t mean it but it still hurts.

As he thinks about what else he could do to irritate her tomorrow, his eyes closed sleeply. After a while he woke up with a start when he heard his maid knocking on his door.
“Yes!” William said as he rubbed his eyes that’s when he knew he was still in his uniform.
“Miss Viki called earlier-she said she won’t be able to come over today to finish her project-asked you to come over to her’s.” she said in a soft voice from outside his bedroom door. “That’s all”. then he heard a faint footstep.
He looked at his bedroom watch and when straight to bathroom.

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He was walking to Viki’s front gate when a black Mercedes drove away. That surely means her parents are going out. He rang the bell and Polly (viki’s nanny and maid) opened the door. She gave him a pleasant smile and told him Viki is upstairs in her room. He walked up the stairs and knocked on the door. He knocked again when he heard no answer. Then he heard Viki’s quite annoyed voice.
“Come in, I told you -.William has already entered but Viki kept talking.-before you don’t need to wait for my answer. She actually was referring to her nanny.
William stood there stunned as he stares at Viki’s back. Why? Coz she is almost half naked. Standing in front of her bed with her back facing him. His mouth drop open.
“Well which looks better the pink or the peach”? She asked again not at all noticing William gaping behind her.
Her hair wet and slickly, sticking at her hot and sexy body. Plus she was only wearing her black bra and her baby blue towel tightly wrapped around her slim hips. She then raised her index finger to the side off her head and played with her beautiful strain of wet hair.

“Well I think the peach is too peachy and the pink does go well with the jeans. Pretty eye-catching isn’t it?” she murmured to herself.
“I think what you are wearing now is eye-catching enough” William said after he finally came down to earth. Right after he said that Viki jumped and spun on her heels. She let out a yelp and hastily searched for something to cover her front. William caught the sight of her sexy hot flat stomach. Her perfectly beautiful curvy breast in her very eye-catching black bra. He grins and was about to say something when Viki threw her pillow at him and yell. She glare at him and at the same time he saw her eyes filled with embarrassment.

“What are you doing here?” She said as she cover her front with her pink t-shirt. “Who let you in?” She asked furiously. William walked to the dressing table and sat on the chair. “Well let me see…you were the one who said I have to come over, you also told me to come in and you were the one who asked me which was eye-catching enough” He said as he tried to get a precious chance to look at her sexy body.

“What were you thinking I am not even dressed and you-you were just standing there and looking at me-when you are supposed to be apologizing .You are suppose get out the room and not sit there and try to steal a glance of me?” She walked towards him still covering her front.

Pissed off. She grab him by the arm and drag him towards the door. She pushed him out the room. Before William had a chance to turn around. Viki slammed the door behind him.

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The next day Viki stood outside the prefect room and silently cursing William for walking in when she was well half naked. She prayed that he had not told all of his friends about what had happen yesterday. It’s always been a must for him to spread any humiliating facts about her. You know just to piss her off.
When she push open the door she really expected William and all his ‘sidekick’ to laugh their head off but instead everyone just stare at her even her best friend Revaty . She couldn’t find any slightest hint of smiles on her friends expect that they all seemed surprised to see her.
When she finally took an empty seat next to Revaty, her friend raised her brows and pointed at her uniform. That’s when she realized that she had worn her school uniform inside out. She gave the most heart-relived laugh.
“What’s wrong with you?” said Revaty as she looked at her.
“Nothing I guess I have a lot of things in mind” Viki said but her eye was glued on William who seems to have forgotten about last night.
After about 2 hour the prefect meeting finally ended. Viki walked to William still confused by his reaction.
“So what’s the catch?” Viki asked. William looked up from his paper work he was writing on. “Come again?” he asked when Viki sat on the desk.
“I said what’s the catch about not humiliating me when you had the big chance.”
Viki asked eyeing him curiously. William just smile and stood up.
“There is no such thing?”he said as he watches Viki packed her things. She just gave him “yeah right” kind of look.
“Really it’s nothing, and yeah we have to finish our sciences project so I want you to come over my house since you thought I was pervert” he said as he packed his things.
“Ok then if you insist, I will be there around 9.00 pm” she said and opens the door “By the way I still thing you are a Pervert” and closed the door before William had chance to utter a word.
to be continued.........

Bloody Mary part 1

2005-04-13T20:07:00.000-07:00

Bloody Mary Part 1

It was the perfect evening for my best friend Marlene Bastion to get married. The wedding was held at an abandoned theater to save up the newly weds budget. I was there with my three year old daughter, Rosaline and my ex university mates. We were having the time of our lives catching up with the latest gossips and meeting other schoolmates. And as usual I was disturbed by my daughter, I ignored her but when she stared to yank on my new dress, I gave up and asked her what is it she wanted.
“Mommy, I wanna go pi-pi” she said in an annoying screeching voice still yanking on my midnight blue dress. I frown and told her to hold on for a while. I watched her ran off to a group off young kids to play. Maria was just about to spill the hottest gossip when Rosaline started to yank my dress again. I turn around and saw my poor daughter dancing around in frustration.
“Maria could you hold that thought, Rosaline wanna go to the ladies room, by the way does any of you know where it is?” I asked, fearing my daughter would just pee right there. Then one of my friends said that the toilet at the end of the Hall is broken and the only one available is the one on the third floor. When I turn to leave, Maria grabbed my hand,
“You don’t wanna go in there” she said suddenly, her voice so deep and dark.
“Why the hell not?” I asked as I raised my eyebrow. I watched Maria look around before she spoke in the same dark tone. “Haven’t you heard of the fearful Bloody Mary, She hunts the third floor toilet and there have been a lot of strange things going on up there”. I watched her for a minute before me and my other friends burst out laughing. Maria looked pissed and “I am serious Jean, for your daughter’s sake don’t go”.
“Get real Maria, since when do you start believing in ghost?” I said amusedly. Then I felt a hard yank and followed by an angry cry “Mummy I wanna go pi-pi Now!!”.
“I think will take the risk, I really don’t want my daughter to pee on her new dress” I said and took hold Rosaline’s hand. I walked to the end of the Hall and found a board saying “Temporarily Not Available” in red block letters. “Guess she was right” I said to myself. I gazed down and saw Rosaline making faces of discomforted. I decided to go for the haunted toilet. We walked through the lonely path to get to the staircase. There was not much light on and the ones that was on was flicking like crazy. I felt Rosaline squeeze my hand, I knew she can’t stand it anymore. We quicken our space and finally reached the staircase. I was not sure I wanted to go on, it’s not because of some ghost but because of the hollow looking stairs. There was no light and the stairs looked very steep.
“Mummy, my stomach aches” She said in a pleading voice. I took a deep breath and climbed up the stairs. I was so scared of fall over that I practically clinging on my daughters shoulder. We were just on the third step when a hoarsely voice called out.
“Hey where did ya think you are going?” I yelped and turn around. I saw an old man in a security suit looking up at us in a blood shot eyes. “Oh I was just looking for a toilet, since the toilet at the hall is under services, so I thought I could try out the one on the second floor”. I said and tried to study him more. The man frowns and shook his head. “The second is no good” He said and pointed the torch at us. “Ok what about the one on the third floor” I asked casually. The old man looked at me like I asked him if I could kill him. His blood shot eyes got wider and his mouth opened in a small O.
“Madam, I am sure you have heard about the dreadful Bloody Marry?” he asked in a shaky voice. “No I haven’t, besides I don’t believe in ghost nonsense” I said sounding stern and acted impatient. “But madam perhaps I should-“his word was cut short when Rosaline made a loud cry “MUMMY I WANNA PI-PI NOW”.
“You heard the small lady” I said in a casual voice and patted on my daughters shoulder. “Very well Madam” he said and guided us to the haunted toilet. As I walked I glanced at the man, he was nervous and unsteady. He was breathing hard and his legs were wobbly. “Can you tell me about this “Bloody Mary”. Like how this ghost came to be?” I asked in a reporter kind of way. The man shivered when he heard the name. After a deep breath he told us the story.
“This theater was once a very famous place, full house every night. But ever since that day everything changed. Once a girl name Mary came in for a late night movie with her fiancé, Billy. He was cheating on her, the whole town knew about his rotten heart but Marry loved him dearly. Back then this place was small, every one know every body. Marry was a rich girl, her father own almost everything in this little town and apart of this theater. But every one knew Billy was only after her money and would do anything to get his filthy hands on them.” He took a deep breath and continued.
“That night, Marry had a huge fight with Billy. She got to know about his intention and even worse about his affair with another girl. Marry wanted to call off the wedding but Billy declined and blackmail her. He tired to hurt the poor Mary. She hid in the ladies room on the third floor and cried the whole night. But what she didn’t know was that Billy had already sent a maniac murderer to kill her before she could spread the word to her father. She was in the last cubicle when the murderer took her life”. He stopped when looked at the sign that read Third floor in capital block letters.
He cleared his voice and continued. “When the police found her body, it was in a horrible condition. She slashed, stabbed and hammered her to death. There was blood everywhere, on the wall, floor and even on the ceiling. Her eyes were gone, Madam. The murderer took out her beautiful blue eyes as a token of cruelty. I believe she died in anger and grudge over Billy. And ever since then many people complained of hearing crying noises and strong blood stench from the toilet. Since then the theater was closed from out of fear and bankruptcy”.
I didn’t realize that we have reached at the end of the third floor. Rosaline and I watched as the old man dug in his pocket for keys. His hand shook terribly as he tries to slot in the key. The keys made noises echoed loudly down the hollow walk way. He gave me one last concern look before he let the door flung open. He nodded. “I will wait for you outside Madam”. I nod in agreement and guided Rosaline into the Haunted Toilet.
The room was icy cold and not at all like what I hoped it would be. I looked around and noticed spider and rodents made their home on the ceiling. The mirror was broken and the pipes are tarnish but it was working fine. I guide Rosaline into the first cubical and went to adjust my hair. As I was adjusting I heard Rosaline called me “Mummy the zip is stuck”. I hurried in and helped her. She told me to wait in with her, so I watched her as she pee on the “sitting” toilet.
“Mummy I think the long hair lady want some tissues”. Rosaline said softly as she looked past my shoulder. I felt the hair at the back of my head stick up. I swear I didn’t hear anyone enter. But one thing for sure the temperature dropped dramatically, I almost felt like freezing to death. “Stop talking nonsense and hurry up” I scold without looking at my daughter. “But mummy she is right behind you, ewww her dress is all messy and dirty” Rosaline said in a very shaky voice. When I looked at her face it was pale as snow and I saw the panic in her eyes. I turn around quickly and found nothing but my own reflection on the chipped mirror. “Hurry honey” I said as I felt quite insecure myself. We got out of the cubicle and hurried towards the door without washing hands. When I glanced back, my eyes caught a large puddle of blood on the floor, exactly behind where I stood waiting for Rosaline. My heart was pumping like crazy, my rib cage ached. I quickly pushed my pale daughter out of the door. Before anything worse could happen.
To Be Continued…………

Just u know for fun : The Perfect Kiss

2005-04-13T02:33:00.000-07:00

The Perfect Kiss.

Dill and I was best friend since we were 10. I share almost everything with him and he would do the same. Dill is a fine 17 year old teenage boy from next door, he is an athletic person yet shies when it comes to girls. I would tease about him and he would tease me back about my boyish character. Well I not the old time famous teenage girl in school but I am famous for my swift and “slamming” skateboard moves. Yeah I’m your typical skater gal from next door. I usually hang around with my skater friends but Dill is always my first choice. I love having his company around and oh did I mention about our passion for surfing. Every summer Dill and I would work our butt off to go to a perfect place to surf our heart out. Just dill , me and the Waves.Unlike me, Dill is famous in school for his looks, body, sports and his brain. I mean, he is like the whole package. Anyhow things changed when Dill’s parents bought a house at LA. His father was a business man and he travels a lot. But this time he decided to take his family with him. It broke both our hearts and it was painful just to see him leave.
Then over the past 8 years we never actually had seen each other, but only through emails, letters and phone calls. I miss him like crazy and I never let him down. Then one day I told Dill about my plan, for us to go surfing one last time before Dill have to follow his father to New York. Then the day came, I waited in the train station and looked out for a figure description that Dill gave me. After about 1 hour I felt a small tap on my shoulder. I turn around and nearly let my drool cause a flash flood. He was like a real life model you usually see in the magazine. He was 2 feet taller then me and his smile was AMAZING. I just love the way his wavy blond hair falls over his beautiful grey eyes. “Hello there my little Friend” he said, his voice sounded deep yet sexy. I duuno how long I stood there with my jaw on the floor but I finally choked out “Hi” WOW. That sounded really stupid...
We spend the whole time surfing and I never took my eyes of Dill. Let me tell u, when Dill took of his t-shirt for the first time for the past 8 years, I was totally mesmerized and I am 100% sure I was gawking at him. During my surf I fell of a lot coz I couldn’t focus on what I was doing. Then after what seems like an eternity of fun surfing and gawking I fell off the surfing board and sprang my ankle. I fell down in a huge splash and made quite a show on the beach. But I didn’t care coz Dill carried me all the way to our hotel. I knew I had dis huge grin and my face was red. He gently put me on the sofa and hurried off to search for First Aid. I watched him bandage my legs the whole time, I just can’t help myself then suddenly Dill looked up and our eyes met. I quickly looked away, I decided to be myself for once, So I decided to do what I do best, complain and brag. So as I was complaining Dill did nothing but nurse my poor ankle. Suddenly my rant was stopped by Dill's lips. Not that I would complain or anything...coz I just melted away.
His kiss is hard, but not forceful. It's rough, but still gentle. His hands are cupping your face, as if he's afraid that I will pull away. I have no intentions of doing so, and to show him that I put my hands around his neck, letting one of them play with his hair. I could feel him smile, and he moves his hands down to my lower back, pushing me further into him. He gently nibbles on my bottom lip, prying my lips apart. I gladly let his tongue enter my mouth, taking my breath away instantly. After along non stopping kiss, Dill finally pulls away. For what seems like an eternity, but really is a nanosecond, we stare at each other, and I tried to read what on his mind. I didn’t get the time to read Dill's most inner thoughts and feelings, because just as fast as his lips left mine, they capture them again.
I felt my whole body shake in pleasure and happiness. “I have always loved you Lily Miller” he whispered softly in my ears and that’s was all I needed to know. “ I love you too Dill” I whispered back tenderly . It was the love that Dill and I shared for long time. We have taking our relationship on step further. I am now Dill’s fiancés and we both work in New York.
OK THE STORY SUCK!!!! BUT ADMIT IT U LOVED THE KISSING PART DIDN”T YA!!!!! AH ……U can’t fool me!!! I know you gal are naughty!!!! ^ _ ^ ha-ha

The Soothing Ghost !!

2005-04-11T06:50:00.000-07:00

The Soothing Ghost!!!

My name is Jessica Parrish, I am married to Ethan Lear and have two beautiful girls, Cherry and Melody. Both my children are underage, Cherry is two years old and Melody is just two months. Cherry is not a very healthy child she suffers from a tiny hole in her little heart. The doctor told us that Cherry is better of living a healthy life in countryside. My family lives in New York City that is quite polluted and unhealthy, for my little Cherry. So my family decided to move to countryside to begin a healthy life. Or so we thought. My family and I moved in to River’s Creek. Kent and I loved the house like no other, it had the most wonderful view and the air is fresh and cooling. The house is facing a crystal clear lake and my house is surrounded by green woods. The neighbors are a few meters apart, so it’s a bit lonely sometimes.
My family is not really religious and we don’t believe in supernatural nonsense. Often we usually laugh or tease about things like that. But little did we know what is about to happen. My husband still travel to his office and sometimes even spends the night there despite the time and distance between our new home. So usually I would spend my time with Cherry and Melody, since I quit my job when I moved in here. I hired a maid to keep my new home running. There were sometimes Cherry would claim that she is being disturbed and observe, but of course being an adult and not religious I decline Cherry complains and punishes her when ever she spoke of it. So for the past 2 months Cherry complained and sometimes she slips into a high fever. I even brought her to the best doctor and yet there was no explanation on why she is behaving this way or about her strange illnesses.

Then one night I was in for a big shock. It was one of the nights where Ethan had to spend the night in his office. During his “stayback” I don’t really get a very goodnight sleep. That’s because I too often feel being watched and fear of buglers. I usually send Cherry to bed before I rock Melody to sleep. Cherry loved being the big sister and always wanted to be a good example for Melody. So she got use to sleeping on her own, besides having her own room gives her the trill. I usually put her to the bed and read her a story before she dozes off. That night Cherry was weak and had a slight fever. I watched her as she get in her pajamas and climb on the bed. I picked her favorite book “The Red Riding Hood”. When I finished I realized Cherry was all sweaty and pale, but then she dozes off. I kissed her on her tiny head and turn on the children’s Walkie Talkie. Cherry uses it to call for me if she has problems. After rocking Melody to sleep I put her in her crib which was next to my bed. I remember it was about two minutes to 12 when I heard noises, first I though it was just my imagination. Then it hit me, the noises was from the Walkie Talkie which I kept next to me. I could hear Cherry moaning and mumbling in her sleep. But there was other voice. Through the Walkie Talkie, I could hear what sounded like a male voice. It stopped me dead in my tracks. I felt my heart pumping like crazy, could it be kidnapers. As I got up and looked for a baseball bat, which I kept it for safety under my bed. As I was looking for it I heard another voice, this time it was a women.
The women and men both were saying something but I could not make out the words as Cherry was already crying. I hurried out of my room with the bat high above my head. I kicked opened the door and saw nobody, Cherry was now moaning slightly but looked sweatier and paler. I looked around and saw the window was shut tight, just like how I left it. I opened the closet and checked under the bed, there was nobody, thinking it was my own imagination, I left the room. I checked on both the Walkie Talkie and it was working perfectly fine. Shaken I slept off. The about 1.45am I heard the voices. Cherry was moaning in her sleep and I could hear the rustle of her blanket. Then I heard the other voices. This time I listen carefully, it sounded like both the male and female was trying to sooth Cherry to sleep. I focus hard on what is being spoken. I heard a humming and a deep male voice singing song. As I listen, I can’t help but fear for my daughter. I ran out of the room and into Cherry’s room panting and arms raised above my head. Again I found nothing but an empty room. Fearing for the worst, I carried Cherry to my room and locked my room door. That night Cherry slept calmly with me and Melody.

I didn’t know if the ghost was actually trying to sooth my daughter to sleep or disturbed her. The next day when Ethan came home, I spilled everything about the last night incident. He quickly called a security company to install security installation. We both strictly believed it must be children kidnapers fault. For 2 days either Ethan or I kept ourselves awake just to make sure. But nothing happened, but Cherry’s health when form bad to worse. I was worried sick and decided to find out. That night both Ethan and I fell asleep form a long day of work. As usual I had my Walkie Talkie turn on. Then about midnight I heard Cherry moaning loudly and trashing her arms and legs. When I woke up I saw Ethan already searching for the baseball bat. We both listen as the Women hum and the man sings softly a lullaby song. I insisted Ethan to go for it, both of us dashed out of the room and into Cherry’s, this time both of us saw them.

The women had long curly hair and old fashion sleeping dress on, where else the man had the same old fashion pants on standing by the side and looking over at my poor Cherry. When we busted in they both looked up. The man raise his arm and the table across the room flung onto Ethan. The door behind us slammed and the lights flicked and burst into tiny pieces. The man looked pissed and then grabbed his ghostly wife, and disappeared into thin air. I looked at Ethan gawking and then hurried over to Cherry who is now crying loudly. I am very sure we pissed off the ghost because once I felt someone pushed me down the attic, where I was investigating for clues about the ghostly couple. Ethan too was threaten by the ghost, he was knocked out when the ghost shook the ladder he used to fix the light. It got even worse when I got two tiny cross from a local church for my daughters. Cherry got better but often tells me that sometimes the ghost would pull on her hair, when she is asleep. Then I had enough and we moved to my sister’s house before going back to our old home.
After a month I received a letter from the church about the couple. It seems Mr. and Mrs.McBell had a little girl the exact age as Cherry. Their daughter died at the age of two from heart dieses. From the on the couple got very depressed and began to kidnap children, thinking it was Kelly their late child. Soon the couple got mad and drown themselves in the lake in front of their house. In order to search for their daughter in the after life. It was said their soul never found the “light to heaven” and haunted the house hoping someday their child would find them. They vowed to protect their child no matter what happens. When I read the letter a little picture fell out from the envelope. When I looked at the picture my heart skip a beat. In the picture was the couple. The was sitting women with a grand gown and long curly hair. Behind stood her husband in all formal looking attire and next to them was Kelly. The girl had the same curly hair, face, height, and body. It looked as if Cherry was dressed in old fashion cloth looking all happy and alive.
THE END !!

IN THE LIFT

2005-04-04T23:18:00.000-07:00

Author:Degi@viki
Rates: 15+ (g00d)
BG story: Place BW, note that VIKI is not me Shafinas and yuwina is not them (the real one la) its just a imagination and not at all refering to anyone.

In The Lift

It was a busy Monday afternoon. Almost all the classes were over, students was everywhere, and I was rushing to get into the lift before it shuts me out. I reached just in time as the door shut close behind me. I press the Ground floor button and lean on one of the corner of the lift, catching my breath as I readjusted my silky shoulder length black hair. I peered hard at the dull reflection in the lift when I heard the lift door opened on the 5th floor. I looked out and waited then blinked like an idiot when realized there was nobody outside. Just as I was about to jam on the “close” button. I heard a faint call saying “hold the door”. I quickly pressed the “open” button and waited for the “person” to show up. To my surprise it was the pale lanky guy I once knew during my orientation week. He is now however one of the most popular guys in IT our collage, well almost.
He entered breathing hard and quickly leans on the opposite side of the lift with his eyes closed. I silently prayed that he would keep his eyes closed until I get off the lift but I can’t but look at his very handsome face. I had always admired his silky dark brown hair that keeps falling over his eyes, it gives him the sexy seductive kinda look. I was so lost and dazed by the site of him that, my heart skip a beat when he opened his eyes suddenly, looking shocked himself. I quickly tore my eyes from his and focused on the changing number. The lift open again on the 3rd floor and I heard a very faint but deep-throat frown from the back.
An athlete figure entered, as he was slipped in his hand phone in his jeans pocket. Whoa some formal attire I thought to myself. He looked up and I realized it was one of the cute boys from my class. Well at least a section or two, but hey he is still my classmate. He gave me a quick smirk and stood behind me. At this very moment I really wish I had never taken the lift, but then again two handsome guys in the lift me with all alone is not so bad after all, well at least I hope so. When the door closed, it made funny jerking movements. I must have made quite a show because when I turn around I saw both of them were looking at me. I just stare at my shoes and wished the lift would just go faster. The lift makes another sudden movement and I let out a faint yelp and held on to my books.
Then I heard the cute guy say:” I think it is best we get out of the lift before something goes wrong”. I was just about to reach for the stop button when the lift made another hard jerk and everything when pitch black. This time I heard both of them yelp with me. I heard myself said “I didn’t do it’ before I can stop myself. I really felt stupid and humiliated. Then a computerized voice came over the speaker. “Please stay calm as we repair the minor damage to our lift system. Thank You”.
I stood in the lift and crossed my fingers, hoped that the lift would not give way and crush to the ground. I open my eyes and realized that I could not see anything in the dark, not even my bare hands. I decided to stay put in my place until help comes. After about 40 minutes another announcement comes through the speaker. This time it was a man’s voice.

“We are very sorry to announce that the lift system have a major damage. It might take us maybe 3 to 4 hours to repair the damage due to the lack of staff assistances. Please stay calm and follow the instruction: Please make sure you do not slip to unconsciousness due to the lack of air lat-“the announcement was cut short and replaced by a circuit noises. We stood silently and wondered what we have gotten ourselves into. Then a current sound made us all jump as the faint blue emergency light came on. I looked up and saw that they were still standing exactly where they stood before. I glide down to the floor and placed my books next to me.
Both of them followed me to the floor. I sat opposite to the handsome guy and to my left was the cute guy, and he of course was sitting opposite to the door. As we sat in silent I looked at each of them trying to remember their names. You see, even though I can recognize a person’s face but I always have trouble remembering their names. So as I sat there I tried to recall the names in the attendance paper. Then DING ! I remembered, the cute guy’s name is Dave Catcher. The handsome guy’s name is Jason “something”, I can’t recall his last name, but hey that’s a little improvement, at least I remember the Dave guy. We sat on the same position until the compact room slowly became warm and dry. I heard rustle of clothing and saw both the guys had unbutton their color button and pull their ties loose. I was getting wet from the drench of sweat but still I refuse to take off my brown over coat.
Both the guys started to have small chats, completely ignoring the poor me. Soon I had trouble hearing, they suddenly seem so far away and the figure of them chatting seems to get dark and blurry. I felt my eye getting heavier and my mouth getting dryer. After awhile I felt my body swung forward. Suddenly I heard a unison yelp of my name. I jerk my eyes open and saw both of them looking at me, worried. The only reason I woke up is not because of embarrassment but because they called me by my name and they were worried for ME!. Whoa! That caught me by surprise. Then Dave said “You know her?” at Jason. He nodded and asked the same question back at him. They then both stare at me.
“I think I’m gonna faint if you guys don’t keep me awake” I heard myself said, wondering how the hell I got the courage to speak to either of them. Again they answer in unison “ok”. Then Dave suggested we talk about ourselves, but both Jason and I decline. So we ended up talking about the most annoying lecturers. For once we had the same opinion; we all get annoyed by our ASSF lecturer. As we chat I noticed that Dave pierced his left ear. There hung a very cool looking sliver ear ring. It glittered every time he moves his cute face and a matching silver bracelet that had this very cool design. A very unique design if u asks me, I don’t think you find anywhere. I found myself staring at him and hoped there was no drool leaking from the corner of my mouth. Every time Dave smiled there was a dimple that made him even cuter. Dave smug when he noticed me staring at him. I blushed and looked away. I was even more surprise when Jason and Dave thought my presentation was very good. Honestly I didn’t even think any of them noticed me standing on the stage during my presentation. Wow you never know, somebody cool like them actually notices you after all. I gave them my famous grin along with “Thanks”.
Two hours pass and we started to get very dizzy and uncomfortable. Dave said “I think you guys have to slap me, if I leave for Pluto” then he gave a small chuckle. I stretch both my legs and said “Sure, I thought you never ask” then we all burst into a laughter. My right leg was getting numb and I can hardly feel my thigh, my cloths were now clinging on my body but I thank god it did not smell. When I saw both the boys unbutton 3 more buttons I felt frustrated. I was even starting to wish that I was a boy then perhaps I could strip off my shirt and cool off. At that thought, I giggle to myself .I caught both the guys by surprised. Jason said “I think Viki has gone crazy”. I gave him a I’m-going-to-choke-u kind of stare but he just gave a tiny but teasing kind of smile and fan himself with his leather file.
Soon we started to talk less and move very little. I could feel my eyes open half way more like lazily. I looked at Dave and he was midway lying on the lift floor. Then I glance over to see Jason who was also in the same shoe as Dave. I put my body a bit lower on the floor and felt my eyes getting heavier and my vision getting very blurriest.
I walked out of the BW and saw my friends Shafinas and Yuwina making faces. “Hey its not like I choose to get stuck in the lift u know”. I said casually as I looked at Shafinas who made face at me. Yuwina came closer looking pissed and shook me hard. ”Because of you we missed both the buss and now we have to walk all the way to LImu” I was shocked to hear Yuwina’s voice. It sounded like a man and Shafinas’s hands were rough and the grip was getting painful. I yanked my body away and my head hit on the lift wall. I open my eyes and started straight at a pair of ocean blue eyes. Then heard another voice said “Man… I thought she was a goner!”. I turn around and saw a pair of green eyes looking back at me. The colorful eyes jolt me back to reality. “I when to dream land again huh?” I said in a horse voice. “Well more like a nightmare land to be precise” garbled Dave as he sat opposite me.
I felt myself blush and I tried to pull away from Jason’s powerful grip on my fore arms. “Thanks guys” I mumbled. As I try to stand up I felt both my hands being pulled down and towards the boys. I yelped as I fell in the middle between the most handsome and cutest guys in the UNITEN. “You stay put here…so we can keep an eye on you” Dave said as he smiled at me. I felt my heart melt down to my abdomen. So as I sat in between them I asked about their family and friends. It took me aback to know that Dave father is actually his step father and that he never seen his real father even though he is still alive. It was also astonishing to know that none of them had a girlfriend, ok more like a real girlfriend that last more then 2 months. When it was my turn to spill about my roots. I heard low grumbling noise from Dave’s stomach. I looked up and saw his face lit up with embarrassment. “You want something to deal with that”. I asked almost laughing. He nodded and I lean forward and dragged my bag. I silently thank god for the interruption because I was not ready to tell anyone about my family or my life. I unzip my bag and pulled out the world most delicious and healthy food. Jacob’s Biscuit milk flavor in cube packet. When I looked from the corner of my eyes I sworn I saw a tiny drool from the very corner of Dave’s mouth. I giggled and hand over the packet. He hungrily pulls apart the seal and munched on the biscuits. I looked at Jason and asked if would like one too. He nodded and licked his lips as I dug in my bag for more. I didn’t feel like eating so I gave the last packet to both of them to share.
As we sat in the humid room I hummed myself a song and my fingers played along by my side, imitating a piano. As I was drifting in to the world of Humming I felt a warm touch on my hand. I jerk away my hand in surprise and realized that Jason has fallen asleep. I looked to my right for help but realized that Dave too has fallen asleep. I panicked and started to pace in front of them. “Shit what the hell am I gonna do? “I said to myself. I looked at them for a minute and realized that they were not moving much. I plop down next to Jason and poked him hard on the shoulder, when he did not respond I jumped over to Dave and did the same. He too did not respond. I stood in front of them and was about to kick them in the guts, when the lift made a hard jolt. I was thrown forward towards them. I fell on top of them and heard them yelp in surprise. I looked up and saw that I had my upper body on Dave and my lower part on Jason. They both blinked in surprise and burst in to laughter. I frown and tried to get off them. As I straighten up my cloths, I heard Jason said: “Hey I’m not trying to pervert or something but you have a very nice body you know” looking at his shoes as he specks. I was stunned and speechless for the whole 1 second and murmured “Thanks I guess”. “Nope Jason is right you do have a very nice body” said Dave in defensive kinda way but when I looked at him he too looked way shyly. “Gee thanks guys ..really “I said looking away and feeling all happy. I was so happy I though I was going to float in the air. Then after another torturing 30 minutes pass we sat in silent and minded over own business. Suddenly Dave said “Hey Viki do you have a boyfriend?”, I jumped at the call of my name. I looked up and saw both the boys waiting for my answer. “No …I don’t ..why?” I asked as I raised an eyebrow. ”Why not you are cute..!” Dave said and smirk sexily. Then he continued “Nothing is just we were wondering if we could bring you out for a dinner. Well since you don’t have a boyfriend is it possible for you to make it?” I stare at them and blinked. Whoa did he just said I am cute and shit did they just asked me out?..ok calm down, deep breaths now, Ok Viki now ask what for. “What for?...i mean what is the dinner for?” I asked. “Well you DID saved us from starving to death …so you get the idea” Jason said still looking at his somewhat seems very interesting shoes. “Ok..i guess.but .no catch ok “ I said sounding very much unsure. I really wanted to smack myself on the face. What a stupid thing to say thought to myself.
“Ok cool we will think of a date to date …I mean to um ah…u know” Dave said as he looked over at Jason for help. “Yeah like on a date ...oops I mean as a treat” .Jason now looked like a red light bulb as he runs his hand through his smooth brown hair. I watched as the strain of hair drop back in place gracefully. Wow he really looked like the “Boss” model you watch in TV. I felt myself melt in to a hot larva at site of him. After 1 hour we heard a sound from the speaker. The same voice announcing: “We are happy to announce that the lift system is now stabilized. Thank you for your patients”
After that announcement all three of us jump up in unison and hugged each other. Dave had his hands around my waist from behind and Jason’s arm was around my shoulders. I could feel their hot breaths on my face and neck. We stood in that awkward position until I realized that I was sandwiched between Jason and Dave. As I quickly pulled away I accidentally touched Dave’s well built abdomen. They felt so WOW !! and I jumped back in surprise. I did not look up at any of them and quickly started to pack my things. The boys too got ready for the “freedom”. We watched as the word “Emergency” faded and the number reappearing. Then the lift made a sudden jolt and moved down. As I stood in the middle I pinched myself on my arm just to make sure I was not dreaming. Suddenly I felt my left hand being stuffed with something. I glanced over my shoulder and saw Dave smirk and then looked up at the changing number. I looked down and saw a small piece of note folded neatly in my palm. I quickly slip the note in my pants and took a deep breath. My heart was pumping so fast that I thought I was gonna faint. In my head I was screaming “OH MY GOD HE GAVE ME A NOTE!!”. The screen flashed the capital “G” and that gave me a jiggle of joy.
The lift door slide open and the compact room were quickly filled in fresh air. I smile and took a step out of the lift. Dave quickly gave me a smirk as his emerald eyes flashed with joy. I watched him jog over to his friends. As I looked around for my friends and I felt a hand on my shoulder. I shudder and turn around and found myself staring at the same ocean blue eyes. He lean in and hand me a pale blue note. He then flashed me the same teasing yet a very boyish smile. He then turn around and walked towards the exit casually with his hands on in pocket I stood there blinking and astonished until I felt a very gentle tap on my shoulder. I turn around to see my friends wide-mouthed. “Ok ..what the hell just happen?” Yuwina asked as looked after Jason. “You are so gonna elaborate very single thing that happened in there, even if it takes all day” Shafinas said as she looked at the lift and then back at me. I smiled and shrugged my shoulders. As I said “Come on guys time to get going” I slipped the note in my pocket and drag them along to the exit.

THE END ……???

p/s be gentle .......feed back needed

Hello !!!

2005-04-04T20:14:00.000-07:00

Hey ya people i made another blog coz i don't want the stories to inerfere with my daily blog ok ok !!!! he he he (jumps around) ...i am so excited and want u all to really enjoy the stories ....the IN THE LIFT story ..i must honestly say : i had trouble trying to end da story ...coz um ah i ran out of ideas.....any how to be honest again.....i am not very good at writing romantic stories....i'm good at ghost....murder.....and other stuff....i lack at funny and romantic stories...so if u find the romantic stories ....a little Awkward ..be gental and easy on the comment and feedback....
before i begain the story i usually write dis ......
Tilte:
Author:Degi@viki
Rates: 15+ (g00d) ----(17-) story contains bad words, brutal scene ....etc
BG story : (tell u alittle background info..of the characters looks age etc...where it happens)
Whoa ok i sound like a pro ....it just that i am not........(sigh...and shakes head)

Actaully i am not really sure u are gonna like it ...that's why i need a honest feedback....ok
very nervous about the first stories !!!